Journey in the skies
Self-Published
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Description
Rebranding as a novel
A collection of short stories exploring a group of young adults a week prior to their meeting.
These stories take place in the great sky oceans of Sirkala. Here tradition goes that once every four years, all those between the ages of eighteen and twenty-one set out on a journey to discover the world. They'll explore ruins, cultures, and people, to learn everything they can about the continents that float among the clouds.
I hope you enjoy the stories.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- koryestfantastique
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 223
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This here is in the format of short-stories. 'One new story in each new chapter' kind of deal. Nothing bad about it, though I've only read the one that has been put out right now. So... I guess I'll keep the comments to the style instead of the story to make sure it has a chance of working for the next stories as well.
The author puts a lot of pressure on the conversation of the characters. One says X. Others says Y. First one says Z. Then you just go through the entire alphabet a few times and you basically have the first story. That might be a gross exaggeration, but not to the degree where I'm straight-up lying. It's a positive thing that the author actually knows how to write conversations well or this would have been an outright 3.
Anyway. Grammar is fine as well. Mistakes here and there. I'll just leave this review with a decent 4.5/5