Jim's World

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Status

Hiatus

Author

windsorrow

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• RoxtRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Great story with believable characters. Original enough to not quit in disgust at blatent plagerism. Brace yourself or you will read it all in one go.
  Authors primary language is english or has extreme fluency. Work contains better grammer than I use, and I havn't noticed a spelling error yet.
• I am AlphariusRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  If you are wasting time not reading this story please disembowel yourself.
• WillyHRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  At first I pessimistic with the title bit after I read. The story is hilarious and funny, MC a little bit crazy but it make the story fun to follow. Please continue writing, this is great story with great plotline
• Rage MageRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  At first I thought this was gonne be a 0815 OP Main Character story, but then evolved into an interesting story with Philosofical quesion deep story and character development. And I found it after there where already quiet a few chapters that where uploaded daily.
  6/5 stars
  :3
• FoxAndHoundRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Hooked!
  Not gonna lie I picked up this book as a time filler, now imagine my surprise when this book turned out to be good! As of chapter 53 I can say that there has been no boring chapers with the comedy actually making me laugh at some parts (including the "Hello world" programmer joke which made me crack a nerdy laugh) 10/10 would read again need more chapters tho, binge read through the rest
• griborRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I really am addicted to know what comes next. So much potential, so many worlds to create. The VR dream in my opinion has been overshadowed by the worlds creation stuff and the nexus between this worlds and "reality" jejeje
• BoredBeyondBeliefRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I think the mc is rather weird and it causes my opinion to dimish.
  The idea isn't original but the actions of the MC are.The other novel that did this also questioned something, his powers but it resulted in him practically going insane.
  Grammar is okay.
  Characters are, not terrible but aren't introduced amazingly.
  I feel like the story starts to end up chaotic later on however.
• randomranterRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Last read *Chapter 49*
  I loved the story in the beginning. But it delved into chaos and that is something I personally don't care about. It is a huge undertaking to even try to make it believable because of so many factors. I gave it a go, but the real world isn't very believable.So I have to let this story go.
  There are some good points though. Many characters are believable. Forrest, Maria and Davis. MC is believable half the time and I like the Brady and all the random characters. Especially Ralph (The security guard)
  The grammar is pretty good. I didn't find any glaring mistakes and the reading is natural.
  The story is at a pace that I'm very comfortable with neither too fast nor too slow.
  *spoilers* Things I didn't agree with/like :
  Going into a game world with cheat mode on and having effects in the real world as well, I don't begrudge he would want money. Seriously, everyone wants it, but there's no reason to get 100s of millions of dollars. Why exactly would you want to come under the radar. There's no clear reason for him to make money after the first week. And that was unneeded as well, in the end he just returned all of the property anyway. He wants to start the company again...why? he was the first one to say, this is too risky in the wrong hands.
  He asks people from another world to come in here.Why? Because he needs guards, what the hell do you think security companies do? He has money now.
  The sale of silver doesn't make sense either.
  He goes to find Chou in the middle of interview and gives a joke. He would use smoke bomb, to show that cars shouldn't disappear but he would jump to 30th floor and give a demonstration of his strength on a "live" interview. really?
  I know I'm ranting...sorry about that, I liked the story, but the scope just became too much for me. This is my first review so, hope I didn't say anything wrong
• MadKingRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  I don’t like where this is going the thing with Jim makes me upset that you did that and the random things popping up out of nowhere is a little disillusioned of the story you made a hard left turn and now the story is off the plot that it was on.
• KamiKira00Royal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  Premise and start of this story was good, but chapters later I realised that this story was bad.
  First side character are not realistic and everything that includes them is forced for example scarlet just thinks like this "I like to stab things and because he let's me stab things I will follow him", also she is assassin who kills people after sleeping with them and then after one night stand with forrest with she doesn't even remember and then she gets in love with him.
  Second MC is just dumb, one chapter he fears for future of humanity because of his project, next he wants to hire workers to work on that same project. Also he forgets one day and doesn't even question what he done, what happened that day.
  Then he has full health potions, antitodes but he always uses elixir, even for simple cuts. he sells not health potion but elixir. He can create item worlds without side effects but doesn't.
  Third author just forgets about things he started writing, one chapter he wrote that this world is maybe fake(this idea lasted few sentences) and he never came back to that. At the beginning I throuth that this story might be about mans philosophical journey, when he starts to understand himself or something like that but I was wrong. It became dumb story about how MC gets everything he ever wanted without any dificulty.