James King: The Gymnasium under Kildashan
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Description
James is a lot of things---a gym instructor, a certified nutritionist, an avid fantasy reader, yet none of those prepared him for the night he stumbled through his bathroom door to an entirely different, magical world.
As he embarks on a journey to figure outwhat the hellhappened, he encounters a mix of friends, foes, and the enchanting life that thrives in this fantastical place.
Amidst these adventures, James realizes his long-held wish may not be a mere dream: Will he be able to open his own Gym in a fantasy world?
What to expect:
Unregular/Untimed updates! I can only write as much as my free time allows. Writing is a hobby at the moment.
Edits of content and context! Yes, I'm not a professional writer, and things can get messy more often than not. Hopefully, kind readers will point out when/where I mess up.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- Chrisbablek
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 25
- Views
- 412
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- unknowntravellerRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Overall I´d say its a 5 start title! It kept me engaged!
The prologue was a bit harder to get through, but as soon as I got to chapter 1, it took off and I couldn´t stop!
So I´d definitely advise everyone to read at least chapter 1 before making their mind up about it!
I´d say the story score is a 5 because of a wide variety of easy to grasp yet interesting features in the plot.
Style score I think is the one where sometimes there are a few inconsistencies that leave me guessing a bit, but its very seldom and to be honest it still works fine.
Grammar score is a 5 because there are no major grammatical flaws I´d say. There might be a couple of minor observations, but nothing that makes it hard to read.
Character score is also great. The characters are very relatable and easy to follow.
Overall I loved it and hope we´ll get to read much more! I think the prologue doesn´t do it justice. Also it introduces story lines that we don´t get to explore yet, but I imagine that as chapters are released, we´ll discover them! As of this review, 8 chapters are in existence!