Jake's Day
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Description
Jake is a good, hardworking man that just wants to get his sister out of the slums and his boss a cup of coffee, but the actions of those around him end up spelling a horrific ending for our protagonist.
This is a branch off from another series I write, The Helena Chronicles. This takes place several books after the first. I chose to write this to show the Butterfly Effect and the poor tragedy of Jake, which wouldn't be expanded upon in the series. Just some random stranger that let a little girl use his phone.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Scott Edwards
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- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 6
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- 1,190
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- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The situation here presents itself as a series of unfortunate events stemming from being sent to get coffee. The main problem is that the setting and the build up doesn't quite give us a lot of insight into the world and the problems of espers before the climax. As a result, the piece doesn't quite carry as much weight or impact as it should.