Ivellee Ivelleh

Information

Status

Completed

Year

2019

Author

Remmie

• Authors Note’s/Afterword
  Apr 29, 2019
• Extra: Off-time Hours With Two Characters
  Apr 29, 2019
• A Meeting Between Two Characters
  Apr 29, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(7)

• QueenofthefuzzybugsRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A truly adorable short story! As of writing this, there's only 2 chapters. But the characters are fleshed out and their dialog is charming. If you like fluffy stories, please take a read! You won't regret it!
• MayContainYuriRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Noticed one or two mistakes but eh, whatever. And it doesn't exactly have a story since it's just about two characters interacting.
  Anyway I don't like writing reviews so just go read it!
• WhitebloodRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This is the cream pie of every otome novel reincarnation series. The grammer can be break the flow somewhat but nothing for regular RR reader. Adorable characters, both male lead and female lead. Annnd just read the damn short story already if you are looking for reviews before reading. Also don't forget to read the extra chapter. ;)
• MrXeriosRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  A nice, short little story. Since you're already here, you might as well read it. You would be halfway done by now if you didn't start by reading the reviews.
  Anyway, the style is nice, the pacing is great, I didn't notice anything wrong with the grammar.
  My thanks to the author for writing this story.
• VadalkenRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I realy like this story and would have rated it very highly if not for the lack of closure. It's intentional, but I still would have liked something more.
  There are some typos but no other noticable problems.
  If you like romance this is worth reading.
• MellizeRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  This is relaxing to read after class or work hours. The storyline may have been simple but the author used it to her advantage by creating two interesting characters whose relationship to one another was natural and cute. There's some grammatical errors but that's part of improving one else. If you enjoy a short but fluffy story, I highly recommend this.
• RznRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  This short story is very dialogue driven and spends most of its time dealing with formalities, some light jabs at one another while slowly dribbling out basic information about the characters. The problem is that it is mostly fluff that does little. What is the purpose of all this back-and-forth? It accomplishes very little and the comedic elements fall flat. The writing has a significant number of errors, but the characters are shallow and the bonding they have is of little importance. That is to say, what is the takeaway from this piece? Two characters who have a thin bond over some commonalities and then it ends. Nothing comes of it, and that is the weakness of this piece.