It's a Reincarnation of the Reincarnator (Book I)

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(This story will not be written in a third-person descriptor, it will be written using First Person Pronouns.) Sorry if this is not your cup of tea.

When referring to oneself in ancient China, people avoided first-person pronouns ("I", "me", "we", and "us"). Instead, a third-person descriptor was used, which varied according to the situation.

Lu Tian Qu is an extremely fickle person. She is so fickle it took her 11 years to graduate from college because she changed her major four times. (And that doesn't include the breaks she took in between.)

She went to sleep, the same as any other night. However, when she woke up she was in the body of a 13 years old girl who was also named Lu Tian Qu. The original body owner had reincarnated back to the age of 13 after being exiled in the furthest corner of the Lu compound and forgotten for 29 silent sad years. She died falling to her death trying to escape by climbing over the wall after her reincarnation.

Come join Lu Tian Qu on an escape as she to figure out what to do with her life all over again.

T/N: I am a new writer with horrible grammar and spelling. English is not my first language. So please excuse the horrible grammar spelling, plot holes, etc. Thank you for showing interest.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2019
Author: Suzannaslanderz

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 377
Views: 575,203

Chapters(170 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

zeoxzRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
this is a good read,
dont let the title or that the mc is female make you discard this novel.
its good. try a few chapters, before deciding.
has a good pace, backstory, and so far it seems very wellplanned (163 chps in)
SrayanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is one of the most promising e-novels I have read on RRL in the last few years. First time author - brilliant stuff. I don't normally binge read but read this from start to current date point in one run of over 12 hours.
I admit It has an unpolished start and the tendency to dump "prior life" data is strong in the early chapters. Much more subtle later on, with interesting twists.
The main character is great fun and is an eccentric genius (not a Mary Sue - no superpowers other than being very very smart).
the supporting characters are a very good line up. No supervillain but the political situation means there is plenty of regular evil goings on.
So the culture is clearly Chinese based, with some of the practices being typical of the brutality of the First Chin emperor (the scary one). But it's a fascinating viewpoint with even small cultural elements defined that give you a perspective on a unique, harsh but beautiful culture. The depiction has beautiful depth of detail that adds to your enjoyment.
As an example, I learned some new information about the role of the Chinese "Tea Master" that I had not read anywhere else. Purely as background.
Already very good. Potential for improvement to brilliant and already a great read.
adam1Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm almost to the end of posted chapters, and I like what I've read so far.
This is very much a slow burn start to a reincarnation novel. In a lot of series, by chapter ten the MC is already powering up and blazing through enemies, where this has a lot devoted to politics and world building, and the fantasy elements come into play slowly and are not forcefed.
As other reviews mention, at the start the MC comes across as unrealistic, but the trend in some recent isekai-type series is to start with OP characters.
I didn't have much issue with the grammer inconsistencies. While present, they didn't impede my ability to follow the story.
I quite enjoy the series overall.
vanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It's your typical reincarnation and very enjoyable to read, with its strength mostly on dialogues. Overall, I really like the story! The characters shine in the dialogues and once I started, it's easy to get hooked with the flow of things. Although there is much to be said on the logic and plots happening. It was a nice read and I've read worse. Still, I guess the points that made me question logics are the following:
Trust issues. Everyone has a huge issue on trust but that wall was easily broken down by the MC since she also apparently has one..? I hope there was more foundation on that trust tho since the people trusting her only did because of her words and chance encounters. And they like her. Idk. Is that normal? Spoiler:
Enough to grant them to make their own army? When they did not show any aptitude for that task? And with zero background whatsoever.
The author has a tendency to repeat themselves. Like really repeat word for word. Especially with the ML with him parroting everything MC does..? I know that it helps to emphasize the weight of her words and actions as something important, but it is overkill when it's done every time something even remotely eventful happened. I guess this could also come across as the author's trust to the readers whether or not we would get it. It's a normal oversight for writers, especially for hobbyists. To repeat something to emphasize a series of events to the point of laying it out plainly to the readers and losing sight of the small details and ripples it might affect the story.
Other than those, the rest are more than good.
I love how much thought and care were done for each of the characters. The MC is OP, but I've read enough OP MCs that I do not dislike this one. There are a lot of characters moving along but it doesn't feel swamped. The pacing is also good. And it could go to heart-warming to dark but still not feel jarring.
MC is nice although there are some parts where the author justifies her actions too much when
MezhanosRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Hoo boy this is a hard novel to review. Let me start off by saying, that some of the issues that user ACERBIC pointed out is genuine concerns. However, the genre is called Fantasy. It's meant to be unrealistic. So feeling put off by them to the point you wont atleast read 10 chapters feels like slap in the face of the Author's hardwork.
Firstly the bad things. I would like to echo Acerbic in one issue. The info dump regarding the MC's family was unneeded at the time. You could have let the readers know through Butler Zhao later on and the information would have flowed smoother.
The grammer while bad gets better as the story goes on. You can see visible improvements if one binge read the chapters like I did. A bigger problem I believe is the repitition of information from chapter to chapter.
Spoiler: Spoiler
3 or 4 chapters during the cleansing of the capital mention bodies being dragged out in wagons multiple times throughout the chapters. Each time referring to the same incident.
As for the good things, I love the cast. Little dumpling is an instant favorite and I really like the rest of the supporting cast. They are fleshed out well and the different POVs work well for this story. A protagonist can carry a medicore story but it's the supporting characters that will truly help seprate a mediocore one from a good story. I like the direction the story is going in and I hope kingdom building with some wars and fluffy moments are in horizon to come.
In conclusion, yes this story has problems. It's being written by someone who wholly acknowledges that they are new at this. However the story is fun to read, and at the end of the day a fun story is all that we come to RRL for. I hope the author is not disheartened by any bad reviewers and do their best to make this story and their following stories better.
KohrimRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
As the author said. The grammar is horrendous. But it is consistently bad. It feels like its own language almost. The retelling of story elements that sometimes happens could be handeld differently as well but you can read over it when it happens. I like the low fantasy/low xianxia-style setting.
Good story so far very slow ''kingdombuilding''
CBaseRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I started reading this thinking that was a cultivation story.
It is not.
Surprisingly fun read nontheless. This is clearly written by a woman and tells the story of a MC who has a saviour complex and is a Mary Sue
The setting is very fluffy(?). Nothing all to bad happens, and every problem is resolved in 2 chapters.
A fun and easy read
Thor AegirRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
This reincarnation story in ancient china hit all the standard cliché plots. From gender hiding to cold love interest to genius MC .the author use the standard writing style of Chinese web novel .
All in all a predictable novel with no real originality. It is well done and is a fine leasure read but nothing give it a head ahead of it's competition.
AcerbicRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
If somebody would set a goal to write a story I would not want to read, I imagine the result is something like this novel. Now, fair warning, I only read the first chapter, so its possible this book is a hidden gem that only gets an awkward start, but I am not going to risk my brain cells on it.
1. It looks like the heroine is Mary Sue. She is (secretly) brilliant, finished Uni with 4 majors, all the meanwhile being also a nerd with passion for light novels, online games and animes. How she combines passion for nerd stuff with getting 4 majors higher education degree on top of being very athletic and participating in Olympic games so successfully she got 3rd place in fencing, is a total mystery.
Does the writer realize how much effort, time and practicing it takes to even take part in Olympics? Its the whole life dedication, with rigorous training, dieting, taking part in local competitions to qualify for bigger events. But nope, the MC is just that good, I guess.
2. Very stupid reincarnation for no reason. The sutiation she arrives into is just so unrealisticly preposterous, it makes me laugh. And what's with all the weird infodump about family drama. So out of place for us to randomly know salacious details about her original body's maternal grandparents household - like why? And how would the original body even know all that, if her mother died during birth and then nobody of importance talked to her? How would she know what her father told the rest of the family? We get this pretty out of place exposition for sole point of DRRRRAMMA, its so bizzare it turns into a joke.
Librarian AkritedesRoyal Road
★ 1.0
I couldn't make it past the first twelve chapters. The shallow, author-insert MC who has no meaningful flaws and is good at everything, the frequent asspulls and backstory retcons necessary to enforce that state, and the generally lacking coherence of any kind of plot or hook to draw interest just killed it for me.
Granted, the poor English didn't help, but that at least got a warning up front.
Frankly, I don't care about the MC. I don't know why I'm supposed to care about the MC or what they're doing. The hook or reason to get invested in the characters and story events just isn't there. And that's the real core flaw in this work, because the other issues are ultimately fixable, work-in-progress learning, or amateur mistakes meant to be learned from.