Isekai Starship in a D&D fantasy world

Self-Published

Description

What if a teen from 1989 got killed and became a Space Ship's AI?

plus additional silliness.

Contains references to D&D and several popular Sci-Fi games and TV shows.

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KoboldPatrolRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Either an abandoned prologue or – if the chapter title is to be believed – a short story (here meaning not many words. Not a short story in the literary definition) about a teen isekai'd to be a space ship AI far away from Earth. Then there's some infodumps about a rather far-fetched back story/human history; extensive description and alteration of the female android body the MC can now inhabit (totally unnecessary for a short story, but very understandable from the MC's personal history); and some Mary-Sue-ing with quantum physics. Oh, there's also some short plot, but I don't really understand why they do what they do and where this story might go if it was continued.
I read this because of the story's title but the content isn't what I prefer to read. But since the story is so short, it didn't hurt me either. Somebody else will probably like this kind of story.
The writing style is a bit simple, but not too bad. Grammar could use good editing for unnecessary capitalization and run-on sentences in addition to some typos; there's a dyslexia disclaimer on another of the author's stories which would explain that.