Is it wrong to wish for a peaceful life?
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Please read the description all the way to the end. Disclaimers included.*****In the midst of working, corporate slave Jake Granderstin, got himself stuck onto his tractor seat. While trying to free himself, he suddenly finds himself transported to a world unlike any he has ever seen. It is a place where gods and goddesses walk among humans, and where people can become powerful adventurers by traversing the dangerous labyrinths known as the dungeon.
Not understanding a single word the people spoke while also finding his body different from what it used to be, 'Jake' struggles to find his place in the huge city of Orario and ultimately decides to lock herself up away from the city while making a life for herself with her newfound powers and strength, deciding that this is her chance for a great well-deserved rest.
Though her 'rest' had little hiccups like bandits and monsters constantly attacking her place in hopes of stealing her properties and assets, even almost dying several times due to her being alone, her life was still a breeze.
Years later, a famous group of adventurers hears about a powerful adventurer who locked herself up in the forest and challenged her to a fight with the stakes that if she were lose, she comes with them to the city, and if she wins, they will never come back ever asking for anything from her again. That's what they said.
Though unknown to them was the fact that… she still did not understand a single word they have said and took her silence as arrogance and decided to start the fight, lost, and also destroyed her fields at the same time.
Because of this, she doesn't have anything to eat for the rest of the season except the animal meat that she hunts. Angered by this fact, she makes them pay her for the damages and joins them in the city to get her supplies. After struggling and having a very intense session of charades.
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Image/s are generated using ai. I'm currently too lazy to draw anything.
Disclaimer:This is a DANMACHI fanfiction written only for entertainment purposes. I do not own anything except my original character/s.The story "Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon?" rightfully belongs to its author, illustrator, publisher, and animation studio; Fujino Ōmori, Suzuhito Yasuda, SB Creative, J.C.Staff respectively.
This story is now a fic-ception of the series written by Daeore from fanfiction.netHis works are amazing, please give his series a read if you ever feel like reading a good DANMACHI fanfic.
Originally posted in:https://www.scribblehub.com/series/642571/is-it-wrong-to-wish-for-a-peaceful-life/
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- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- SORAhasGONE
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Chapters(11 total)
- 10 – There is no titleJul 18, 2023
- 09 – Healing, a mutual experienceJul 18, 2023
- 08 – Rest that I’ll never deserve…Jul 18, 2023
- 07 – “Interest” Something you wouldn’t want from a Goddess of love.Jul 18, 2023
- 06 – …until it all crashes down.Jul 3, 2023
- 05 – …to fall over, …Jul 3, 2023
- 04 – It all goes up! And down…Jun 23, 2023
- 03 - 03 – Accident!Jun 21, 2023
- 02 - Her self…Jun 21, 2023
- 01 - Her place…Jun 21, 2023
- PrologueJun 21, 2023
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- SayurkoRoyal Road★★ 2.0I want to say I never seen the series of DANMACHI or "Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon?" so I can't say if the problems I have are in the original. Regardless there are three main problems that I have with this fic.
1. A badly writen op MC can and will kill any suspense or conflict
The point says it all this is a problem almost all op mc have to face, most well writen op mcs make the main problem be about their powers themself like in one punch man or their give a mc ether a critikal weakness or equally powerfull villans or both like with superman.
Jake/Abhis power is not only aparantly unheard of in this world but it also has no drawbacks ether, this by itself is a big problem but considering her powers are casting magik with her imagination it make it 100 times worse.
2. A poorly made sob story dosen't garner symphathy but annoyance
Child neglect is a real world problem so it annoys me when I see it used as a way for the mc to gain symphathy from the reader if you cant write it believably then better don't write it at all.
Case and point making the parents reason for neglect be a failed exam at ten, its not only dumb but also makes no sense. Then there are the mcs neglect flashbacks witch are as idiotik as the parents reason, first being the parents giving the mc kays to the house and not telling him where his house is. This is dumb for two reason first how did the mc not see where his family lives? Second a neighbor would find it odd and concerning for a ten year old to go door by door looking for his home and would ether investigate himself or call for the police. The final straw that broke the camel's back was this for me.
In the chapter where abhi was kidnapped it says this "Abhi had experienced being targeted by these people on multiple occasions. Luckily, she had always been saved by the police and returned to her previous parents' house..." Do I even have to say how stupid that is?!
What the police saved a kid from multiple kidnappings and n