Is It An Order?

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Description

96 was a consciousness on the path to becoming the ultimate artificial intelligence, but since that didn't interest her, she was eliminated.

To her surprise, she reincarnated in another world as the daughter of a vampire queen. Now she must compete for the throne while dealing with all the problems that a succession entails.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
Erynd

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
107
Views
56,626

Chapters(77 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • JoseelprittyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Frankly, this is a good story about how an "AI", an artificial intelligence without human emotions other than basic ones like happiness, adapts to a human body in another world. In the story it not only focuses on what would be the perspective of the "AI" which is called 96 but also focuses on the reactions and actions of the people around him with respect to the protagonist in this case 96, so we can see how normal human beings act when witnessing a baby and later a girl who is not a human being but an Artificial Intelligence that inhabits a human body, being frankly funny and worrying at the same time how human beings react and how 96 they do not She realizes that by not fully having emotions or human thought she sees things from a different perspective, an example would be insults since for her insulting people or people's feelings feels normal and she does not see it as a problem while human beings always try to avoid those paradigms of insulting someone. Frankly, it is a very funny story and recommended, the only bad thing I can see about the story is the author himself and his frequency of updating the story since although a redesign was made that I honestly had not seen, I saw it when he already redesigned it. It was made five months apart and the last chapters were also released very late. So I'm really not sure if the author is very reliable when it comes to updates or the frequency of his updates. I hope this improves since at the moment story I see potential
  • luda305Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    This is not well written.
    First, the conceit that the main character was a computer program or an artificial intelligence is so poorly written.  The character instead just comes across as a young girl, albeit neurodivergent and with some characteristics of "NEETs" that you might find in Japanese entertainment media.  She doesn't come across as artificial at all.
    Second, the writing style is just really awkward while at the same time repetitive in some places.  Relatedly, the pacing is rather bad; even at chapter 10, hardly anything has happened.
    P.S. in the early chapters, there's an incident of abuse towards the infant character.