Intriomancer: The Sanctity of Water

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Description

In a sprawling, neon-lit city under the haunting glow of the Emerald Moon, Elias struggles with an oppressive sense of isolation and unease. Sequestered in his room for years, he navigates a world dominated by technology and perfumed illusions, seeking an escape from a life filled with rot and despondency. As he juggles demanding tasks, ruthless deals, and enigmatic meetings with malevolent benefactors, the line between reality and the synthetic blurs. This series delves into the depths of human resilience, exploring themes of existentialism, identity, and the quest for peace in a fractured world. Join Elias as he struggles against the confines of his existence to reclaim life, truth, and meaning amid the chaos and degeneration surrounding him.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: OneLazyOwl

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 2
Views: 2,448

Chapters(19 total)

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azuregrasslandRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I have always believed that the first step to a good story is a unique idea, this novel follows that perfectly.
Style: The style of writing is quite dynamic, the poetic writing style helps with clear imagination, though it might prove to be a bit difficult for people who are not familiar with poems to understand.
Story: The story is unique, and the feeling of distopia it gives is certainly helped by the writing style. A bit of a clarity issue exists, it took a lot of brainpower to understand what was going on, perhaps a few more paragraphs about what is what would help better the story.
Grammar: Nothing much, some paragraphs are a little too big, otherwise i could not find a single mistake.
Character: The sole issue that requires some work done is the character of people like Elias, Vina and other introduced characters.(I might have remembered vina wrong) After reading i could not figure out what kind of people these 2 are, their personality is mostly consistant but leaves quite a bit of room to be explored.
I would say that the writer has done a good job, specially for this being his first story. I hope to see more from you! And i will be giving a full read after the story is completed so continue to write, because an abandoned story is just a wasted opportunity.