Innocent Devil's Harem

Self-Published

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Description

Kai has a big secret he has kept all his life, even from his older housemate,Serenity, who he began living with, shortly after their parents all died in a car accident.

However, when he finds out that Serenity’s best friend has beenkidnapped by a serial killer, just how far will he go to save her?

And how will he handle his secret finally getting out, that he’s much more than what he seems?

NOTE:This story is R-18 for strong language, mild violence, and adult themes including detailed erotic scenes.

Tags:Harem, Male Lead, Shifter, Lesbian, Supernatural, Succubus

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: KaizerWolf

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 294
Views: 158,576

Chapters(51 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

AvemGamerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
If your looking for a story where the MC fights supernatural monsters and secret organizations while searching for his true origin, you're gonna have a bad time. Because thats not the focus of the story. Its [Read review title]
Now if you know what you're looking for and you still want to read well the story is just for you. Yeah sure it has the same amount of sublety as your standard pizza man porn vid. But the supernatural aspect and writing is good enough that you can still have a great time. You just have to shift your thinking and read it as for what it is. [Read review title].
Big HavokRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It is a good story and I am really enjoying it so far. There is obviously some stuff going on in the background that we are unaware of yet and I can't wait to see what happens. The characters are good and I am looking forward to seenthem explore his powers more and also what other supernatural races we might see. Please keep up the good work and keep those chappies coming!
Mr. ARoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I don't get the negative reviews, although giving yourself reviews is a dick move (and who knows if they are really fake) this story brings exactly what it's supposed to.
The genre is harem, and mature, and some smut.
Truthfully speaking so far there wasn't that much smut like everyone was saying, maybe like 10%.
So unless the character interactions/style/grammer or any of the other criteria to judge a story are bad, there is no reason to give half a star.
I'll be giving 5 stars because while it is not perfect, it is pretty good considering the criteria above (good grammer, world building and character interactions). Also, I want to give the author some support.
Don't hate a story for delivering on its premise.
Eddie757Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I will start by saying that this story by all purpose is a 18+ or at the very least a 16+. Strong on the smut, as urban dictionary would say, "Erotic writing that contains , sexual content. Something that renders you wanting to pour bleach into your eyes after reading, yet possesses an irresistible that makes you eventually and read it again"
The story is pretty good so far with the main goal being to creat a Harem (A is essentially when there is a boy who is bombarded by girls presenting various physiques. The girls in the harem are all attracted to the boy and often fight over his affection. A can be metaphorically describes as a rooster in a .)
It's nice to see a more cliché type of main character. no NTR, wouldn't go as far to say good guy, but not a POS either.
ehhh some people saying not really royalroad material, but It has a story line/plot would only say about 20% being smut or the lead up to smut.
all in all like the only comment I would say need work in my mind is: maybe don't over play the child like emotions of the main character. But that could just be you leaving room for him to grow in the future after some crises.
RavicensRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
An honest OREO (good, bad, best) review:
The Good: It's easy to like the characters. Kai is a supernatural creature with a few weaknesses, but with a moral compass. In the first few chapters, you learn what he is good at and you learn the quirks of his powers, mainly that he has trouble controlling his transformation when he is emotionally ovwrwhelmed. This happens very frequently fairly early on every time he becomes aroused by a certain female character.
The Bad: Sometimes, the author gets into explanations about things that don't really matter. These are easy to sk through or skip without missing anything. I would prefer not to have to do that when reading. If those details become important later, the author could simply explain them when they are relevant so long as they've been adequately set up. An example is the matter of the 'trust fund' scenario for the MC which explains how he was able to start living with his childhood friend. I would rather have spent those early moments in the fiction seeing instances of the MC's moral strength and courage which makes him an alpha male among other males, but horribly inexperienced with women, rather than being told in the author's notes that this is so.
The Best: I really enjoyed the romance and the erotic scenes. There is a stark contrast in language when things become erotic that was a bit jarring, but I still enjoyed the build up and release between romance and sex. I will emphasize here as the author does in the notes: the story is, indeed, character driven and is not a smut fest. I felt very teased and liked the characters enough that I cared about them when they finally hooked up. I think the author could have made the situation more believable by writing in some time between when the redhead and MC finally become aware of their feelings for each other, and when they do their first sexy things together. Maybe actually give them their first date a few days or an in-story week after. Even a one or two paragraph t
Cyoa11aaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Good begining gets into the action pretty early on and the explict/romatic parts are both well done and have the option of being skipped while still understanding the story.
MC's signifigant other seems a bit 2D but hopefully with time they are a little more fleshed out.
Only read up to chapter 7 so far but ill probably read more later.
4/5
PartysanRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
A story that feels as if it’s trapped between wish fulfilment and self-awareness, constantly forced to write excuses for its own desires. While it begins as nothing so much as a Twilight: Midnight Sun with a supernatural young man trying his hardest to suppress his desires for a girl that is somehow special to his instincts, it doesn’t really want to be conservative Christian propaganda, but it’s still beholden to many romance tropes. It doesn’t want to slutshame and profess purity, but for some reason still really wants the MC’s girlfriend to be a virgin, so a lot of words are spent on him assuring her und us, that it was her decision to wait and he would’ve been ok with her having experience. It doesn’t want to romanticise controlling overly jealous boyfriends, but still really wants the MC’s girlfriend to feel like a secure possession, so it’s her saying problematic stuff like “I won’t even be friendly with other guys.” while at the same time being willing to share him with another woman. The main character is absolved of guilt by never once demanding his girlfriend adhere to patriarchal norms of how a woman should behave, but his girlfriend just happens to be an almost perfect reflection of those desires anyway. It feels artificial and forced, too clearly intended to fulfil traditional desires of the reader without accusing them of holding traditional values.
There’s a second point of critique, which is the pacing and structure of the novel. We’re set up for a drama of forbidden desire and supernatural horror, then suddenly neither of this is a problem, because the perfect girlfriend and her boundless acceptance have always loved us already and we’re in sweet romance mode with the transformation becoming more an issue of humour and sexual tension. The switches between romance and murder are abrupt and jarring – one minute a murderer beats down the door, the next it’s suddenly trivially easy to disguise having ripped apart a police officer on your front lawn so w
grovekeeperRoyal Road
★ 0.5
The story is like a porn movie with a flimsy thread and lots of smut. It's kind of like a text version of a porn movie, despite the author claiming otherwise. If anyone want to live their fantasy about nearly all kinds of sex, you are welcome to try.
Don't really hope for showing through the story, you will get the MC's characters through Author notes.
You'll also get 'unexpected surprises' and other paradoxes with a flimsy thread holding everything together. Will also be reminded about copyright and that the story is 95 percent story every chapter.
"Also, this story is character-driven and is roughly 95% story and 5% explicit scenes, with some action and mystery sprinkled in there too."
No wonder, it's just leading 90 percent of the time.