Inkea - New beginnings.

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“Jarle! Get your ass back here! Brandon is trying to explain quantum tunnelling to us again”.

The gruff voice of Drill Sergeant Shaw enters my ears like a bad reminder of can happen when alcohol, 80-year-old men and a funeral get together and muse about their lives. My dearest wife died a few weeks ago, and in their absolute brilliance, they decided that what I needed to get me out of my funk was a good hike in the Rocky Mountains. At the tender age of 82.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
MichaelRotmo

Tags

ACTIONADVENTUREMAGICCOMEDYROMANCE SUBPLOTREINCARNATIONSTRATEGY

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Rating
5.0/ 5.0
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357

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Community Reviews(1)

  • SR FauthRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It is an interesting idea and premise. It seems very isikae, but with the flavorings of a modern life. I am a tad confused on what is actually going, as it seems rather focused around eating and taking a rather prolific #2. However it is very early in the fiction. I think a bit more clarifying information, or even setting info would go a long ways to building a better idea of what a reader may be getting into.
    There are quite a few spelling mishaps, not errors, and as a reviewer of mine said just recently; install a Grammarly addon to your browser. It will help catch a lot of those little things.
    Overall I think the idea is solid, and I cant wait to see where the story will take us. The premise shows promise, and it was interesting to read.