Indomitable

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Mike had quite the boring life. At least, it was boring when compared to what was to come with the assimilation of his universe. Join Mike on his journey to have a more interesting life, meeting a buff healer, a rogue with a flair for the dramatic, and many other eccentric characters! Any problem that can't be solved with a hit of a hammer just needs to be hit harder.

Information

Status
Cancelled
Year
2023
Author
Jacks of Clubs

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICCOMEDYSTRONG LEADGAMELITMALE LEADPROGRESSION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
304
Views
124,708

Chapters(96 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • Trixuny2000Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The first thing I would like to say is that the story has good grammar and flow of words. People talk like people and you do get to know them. It has the feel of being fast paced.
    On the subject of being a litrpg it is well done. I like the leveling system and love the unique twist the author has added to it that you see pretty early on. You will know it when you see it.
  • summerrain02790Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Great rewrites on all chapters! Amazing new twists and visual additions. Love it so far.
    Chapter 1 got me hooked and now I wait to see what happens. I enjoy a bit of a mystery and not being told everything happening all at once. So great job with just giving me a peak into the future without spoiling the surprises. I like being shocked with the main characters of the story.
  • Puppycat ProductionsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    A good progression/LitRPG. The story is a little rough around the edges but that's just fine for a lead who's a little rough around the edges. It starts with a bang and keeps going into more action and adventure as well as deeper mysteries. So far the main character seem to be alone in the narrative, so if you're looking for something with a lot of character interaction, this won't suit your tastes. But if you don't want a lot of drama and nonsense getting in the way of progress and action, this is for you.
  • Observer in the darkRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Loved the opening and the system looks interesting.
    The fight scene was nicely executed and was a proper struggle between the protagonist Richter and the beast.
    There are a few grammatical hang ups here and there but they can be easily fixed.
    The setting is the strongest point overall.
    The protagonist is also likeable and not overly edgy or overly wimpy. There's a nice balance.
    Also, Richer has lost a lot lol, I can't even imagine a clean head.
    Those are my thoughts, the story can get much better with some editing.
    Writing this to fill the word count please ignore.
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    Advanced reviews need way too many words man.
  • Lord_of_AvalonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    It been a while since I read an interesting Litrpg story. This story manage to be interesting. The writing is flawless, with great grammar and sentences flows well without being jarring.
    The setting is well done. It not too grimdark,it still clear in the background that there is an Apocalypse going on and tragedy abound. The author shows instead of telling this. There good, bad, evil people. People who are greedy and power hungry but do good, people who are good but struggle to do much. Those who are scared but find courage in their own ways. And each individual even background characters have a personality. And the other characters beside the MC get to shine and be badass even better than him.
  • EldritchPotatoRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The grammar is good, with few mistakes and clunky writing. Everything flows well and is clear.
    The system is well thought out, it is simple but easy to understand and not bogged down with pointless numbers. The main character is likable enough though also fairly simple, I feel like he could have been flushed out better and less generic but compared to many protagonists in LitRPGs it could have been far worse.
    The Bumblebee dress is amazing and I hope he keeps it. 100%
    The fact he can kill things with his bare hands is truly insane. Humans pretty much gave up any natural defence and weapons for bigger brains. I think it does a decent job of showing his “chosen” strength without immediately being overpowered. The fight scenes are also well thought out and described, and the MC is intelligent enough to use strategies beyond simply hitting stuff, well somewhat.
    All in all, it is not the most unique story but I am definitely looking forward to how this plays out. The world-building is interesting and the character is likable. I hope the MC’s friends are incorporated later on. The story definitely has style and I enjoyed reading it.
  • NocainRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Getting achievements, stats, fighting monsters, looting them and crafting something from the bodys.
    Does this remind you of something?
    It's a standard story of a warrior/ crafter.
    The pacing is quite fast and the character reasoning sounds a bit like " battle junky"
    I stopped at chapter 14, because I'm not much into battlejunky storys.
    If you like this kind of story, it's quite a comfy, binge worthy story.