(Indefinitely paused) The Stone-hearted Enchanter

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Status

Hiatus

Author

thedaidontstop

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• ZorrosanRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The visualization and intricacies of the crafting system are truly engaging and leaves me in anticipation of what will be crafted next.
• Ambrose ufoRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I love this story
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• Benny_FantasticRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I’ve really enjoyed the story so far, the main character is not overpowered, the plot is interesting and clear, and the combat is well paced and exciting. A lot of potential here.
• gnarlytreemanRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I enjoyed this.  It has a good tone, is creative, and you can read it with the kids.
• quicksilvRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The title intriqued me, the plot is good so far, definitely going to keep an eye out for you :)
  I just hope you keep updating like you have recently and not chapter 1 lol
• Winged ThingRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  To say it simply, those who like blue boxes combined with virtual reality, realistic npc characters and an excellent storyline will love this novel. Some won't, but they are few and far between.
  If you're reading this review, don't. Give the story a shot.
• KwaziRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  As of chapter 4.2, I can say that this story has me enthralled. I honestly can’t wait to see another chapter. I recommend reading this story, and I hope it continues all the way to completion.
• tonythereaderRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  This WAS a good story. Don't know what happened to it though, a little update from the author would be nice. At least let us know if you quit or are on a hiatus.
• SomeMiddleSchoolerRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  This book has been an exceptionally good book. Although it has an overused start (Unlocking unique powers from the start,) the plot is okay and the grammer is good. However, the title seems a bit misleading to me. To me, the main character did not seem to be an enchanter, but a mage who could enchant. The book describes the class enchanter as the jack-of-all-trades, but the main character is a bit too strong. His use of essence from other monsters allows him to strenghen himself permanently, without leveling up. His enchanting abillities are too overpowered, as he could create epic level weapons when he is below level 10. The MC is naive, thinking that he could earn money to support his life by playing a class which was known to be "crippled" and a waste of time. Extreme amounts of luck, from discovering an unique abillity to surviving a long fall by landing in a pile of dung, were needed to move the story on. Not to mention the lack of proper world building outside the starting area. This book is good and the author spent time on this, yet he/she is not creative enough to actually create a story without overuse of the plot armor. Still a good book, but it has room for growth.
• AesoirRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  This review covers chapters posted up to Oct 12, 2018.
  This story is well written in regards to grammar and quickly engages the reader. The world building feels a bit lackluster, but that's not because of the author not dedicating writing to world building. It's due to the lack of concrete game mechanics in the world.
  The setting for the novel is a VR game world that has been released for 3 years. Even if a branch of skills is freshly pioneered, the programmers would have had enough previous launch issues to circumvent any infancy stage bugs that usually comes with launching a game. (Example: a newbie one use weapon that nullifies the defenses of a target for the duration of a fight: it's fine for a level 1 boss rabbit, but if an end game player finds a way to collect them...) many of the weapon enchantments and items being made in this novel would break mmorpgs.  Examples: easy to make growing items without ultra-rare resources, permanent upgrades to barriers for low cost (aka without permanently losing stats or using ultra-rare consumables), percentage of total damage per spell weapon effects (extra 25% damage of next two spells or skills), %health stacking damage debuffs... etc. no programmer or AI would allow them to exist in the first place, and if one did slip through, it would be immediately flagged and nerf'd.
  Second issue is that the MC doesnt seem to need to log out, ever. Which is fine if he saved up to do a long term pod or something, but nothing of the sort was mentioned... it appears like it was simply forgotten. Kind of a big plot hole.