Indefinite
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Tied to a room with only the instruments that keep me alive. Having suffered for so long, I too will succumb to the passage of time.
So what is this darkness? What the fuck is going on? What is this indiscernible voice that surrounds me? You going to send me somewhere and i get a choice? and you giving me my memories?
Reborn as a the child of a ruling clan, a fresh start with a family.
This time, I will have no regrets!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Bryan
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 223
- Views
- 30,282
Chapters(10 total)
Reviews
No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!
Community Reviews(1)
- ZarioxRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Review for chapters 1-9:
Bryan's writing is vibrant and his world is filled with colours, the execution of his paragraphs makes you feel the world he creates, his grammar is also top-notch so there's nothing more than excellency in that aspect.
Perhaps it's because Indefinite is in its early state but it's hard to fall in love with the characters, Bryan's world is fullfiling but most of the characters feel bland and without exposition, MC interaction with other characters feels like reading how water muds. Not enough interaction.
The storyline at the moment is bland but that's because we are in the set-up phase, so I don't really worry about it, -indefinite seems to be planned so we shouldn't worry about the plotline.
Even if the style is beautiful it gives much to think when the only thing you get is a perfect world and not characters to blend into.
Overall its an amazing piece of art and i'd love to see its evolution. You should probably read it.