Incoming Chaos on the Immortal World

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Description

God's Power, a unique power of the gods that was given to human across the world in the myth. There are only 5 kinds of being with the power of the gods. Heroes, Demigods, Gods themselves, Titans, and the first being ever created, the Primordials. Now, what if all of that were to fall in the hands of a man? And what if the man got sent to the immortal-xianxia world bringing all that powers? And could qi counter god's powers? Just see them here! In this exciting adventure of the man with god's power! Ok, actually I wouldn't know if it will be exciting or not. Well, just stay tune!

Not gonna make mc instantly op with all of that god's powers having fun in xianxia world, will progress gradually but not with cultivation level.

All of the mc's power come from myth, not original! Don't sue me

Update Schedule: Wednesday, Saturday, the rest are uncertain. If I'm bored, I will update

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: NevetsKen

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 100
Views: 62,072

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

AdsterhappyRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
While the flow, pacing, grammar are questionable, the author had put some effort in making the story as well as the characters.
The plot setting is debatable, given the weird flow and style, it does have some form of uniqueness in it, since it goes over just simply being another xianxia/martial arts story.
I would give higher if the story is re-written into something more legible.
Anime-SenseiRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Review by the God of Boxes, the great and powerful, the master of dropped fictions, the reviewer whose review who you are reading today!
Let me start by saying I don't like the style, paired with below average grammar it is not the best story to binge read, also you can't really even do that. Yet.
The story is moving slowly along, not glaringly slow, not too fast either so you won't be missing any key emotional moments as far as I know at this pace.
Grammar, get a PR, please.
The MC is let's just say unreasonable. No one would memorize all the greek pantheon, then act barely surprised when one of them show. It's unreasonable, though not at the point where I hate him. The characters that have been introduced are sadly better. It should be the opposite if you want an epic tale and seek to retain readers, author.
Overall it's a decent story, exclude the glaring grammar issues you shouldn't have a horrible experience reading this fiction with its premise and all.
Best to wait while the author writes more chapters, I may update this review, may, if I continue to slightly enjoy reading this story.
Try your best to improve your grammar, though I am not much better. Refine your skills and your story may show up on the top 50 in under a year, top 10 in maybe a few if you refine your skills and pump out chapters.
Don't go on hiatuses for too long or you may end up like me who can't finish a story....yet.
Better get started. Good luck and continue dreaming big!