In the Murk of the Night - Cyberpunk Red/2077 SI
Self-Published
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Description
Waking up in a dark place is bad enough. Realizing it's a world you only saw in fiction is worse.Fortunately you have this guy, or rather a copy of him, saying he's here to help you. Problem is he's a pulpy superhero in a cyberpunk world where they don't have superheroes, and the closest thing to good guys they do have are mercenaries with cybernetic enhancements.He's either crazy...or crazy in a bad way.However, the guy, Murk's his name, has something that will help. Well...if I'm stuck here, I might as well right?This is going to end in flames isn't it?...
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Gundam Chief
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 70
- Views
- 7,054
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- LaevusRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Not much here but what is here is promising.
The author obviously knew the content and a starting point for the story. And it was executed well. It's just a shame for the rest of us that it wasn't continued.
The grammar and syntax were well written so no complaints there.
The MC could have been fleshed out a little more in my opinion. You know he has previous martial arts training since he claimed a style and was able to recognize another. He's obviously not a soldier though. Other than that though there's next to no other background. Another thing that was a bit strange to me was that the 'New body' was very close to the original Murk Man according to reaction from the video. Admittedly I don't think he commented on the face in the video but I got impression it was suppose to be like a talking to yourself in the future thing. If I can make a suggestion it would be to have his original body pre training. Then gradually morphed and upgraded during session. Then finally new and improved Murk Man for the ejection from the capsule.
Where ever you are; I hope you keep writing. - LordMacRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The amount of detail in describing scenes and lore from the game that are present, speak volumes to the amount of work this author put in the beginning.
It is noted that the character are somewhat a "leap of faith" type of guy putting by trust on information that he has no true knowledge to confirm it by another sources.