In Search Of The Sanctuary

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[CURRENTLY ON ANINDEFINITEHIATUS. PLEASE REFER TO THE PENULTIMATE CHAPTER FOR MORE DETAILS.]

A man summoned to a fantasy world agrees to the request of the Humans to vanquish the Demon Race and becomes the Hero. After a lengthy ordeal fraught with obstacles, he, along with his allies, defeat the Demon King and drive the Demon Race to the brink of extinction. But he is betrayed by most of his allies, who attempt to exterminate him. He is saved by the Goddess of the World, who shows him a vision of a Sanctuary of unparalleled serenity and urges him to come to her.

He is reincarnated as the son of a wonderfully cheerful Elven couple Elrohir and Luthien, who name him Aldon. Follow Aldon on an adventure of a lifetime as he seeks out the Sanctuary to get answers.

Chapters will be updated weekly on Mondays at 08:00 AM IST (Indian Standard Time).

This novel is also published on: Wattpad, Scribble Hub, and FictionPress.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Melancholic Sage

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 13
Views: 7,400

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

NandiniRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Well, looking as only one chapter has been published, I'm reviewing the potential of this fiction. As a matter of fact, I've been reading fiction for over 4 decades and have read many stories of the same type. I really think yours might be unique. But then also, can't say much for definite since it's only been one chapter. I'll be following this closely as it has piqued my interest.
Style: Looks good, but can't really elaborate as its only one chapter at the time of writing.
Story: There is a lot of untapped, immense potential in it. I have seen a lot of stories with same setting, but yours seem different. Call it a gut feeling.
Grammar: Can improve. I see a lot of passive voice misuse. Please be sure to hire an editor if you ever want to publish this in a physical copy. I know that I'm also a novice in grammar. I'm just stating what I saw, not undermining or even discouraging you.
Character: Can't say anything from 1 chapter. Really. Character analysis needs more chapters. But, from an initial point of view, though the characters are alluring, they're lacking a certain depth.
Though it's only the first chapter, I'm already looking forward to the next ones.
(P.S: I wanted to give this 3.5 or 4 rating, but gave 4.5 as an encouragement to do well with the story. I'll be sure to keep updating my review whenever I have time.)