[In Pause] Rock Birth : Golem Evolution [Anglais]

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Description

What happens when the most ordinary thing begins to evolve?

(If ordinary animals start to evolve, what will happen?)

Follow the adventures of the rock that awakened its consciousness through an evolution system given by a deity.

From a rock to the strongest Golem, follow to see the path the rock will take to become stronger.

For now, the chapters are small, but I will try to improve them.

A small recommendation: read it horizontally or on a computer because I made it more readable that way.

This story is like a test to see how to write better and improve.

Publication delays are not regular.

Feel free to provide advice to improve the story; I'll be looking for it.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Ctulhu Apostle

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Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 101
Views: 43,251

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Community Reviews(3)

andrewspebinhaRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
man, in my opinion, there is continuity in the story, there are parts that are confusing, you transfer the story too much from one character to another without ending as I said it gets confusing the story There it is at the beginning, it has a lot of potential, I hope you have a good day
Mr.Penguin-The-FifthRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Its good, but not my cup'O'tea, I understand that your a new author, or at least a fairly new one, but the system text is hard to read, the voice of the system shouldnt really be needed to say more then one, and the way you wrote the text, while again understandable, ive written like that in my private storys, would be better with a
"blah blah" he said with a smile. and the system, I prefer blue boxes myself so I realize I am a bit bias, so I wont comment more on that.
so while good for a fairly new author its just not my cup of tea, I looked a bit futher in the story, to see how you wrote talking, and so thats part of my review,
now I will say, if you do make any new works, I will prob read them.
Stand_OverdanceRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This concept is very good and potent in my opinion. But writing style is a little bit confusing for example in the first chapter "There was standing God, lying on the grass" It doesn't add up for me at least. Chapter releases are very inconsistent. Overall if I had to review it one sentance: "This rock, will rock" but for now there was too few chapters for the rock to truly shine. I look forward for the next releases and I'm excited to see how this rock will rock.
Very rock.