In another world with the crafting system

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Author of "Killer of Mc's" and "Gamer of the Seas"

Creator of the cover: NitrogenousBeing in Discord. Thanks man :)

This is a work of mine from another website that I am copy-pasting from there to here to get my work known across other platforms.Heavily inspired by Minecraft and Terraria.

Imagine Minecraft and Terraria had a baby. And that baby was transported to a fantasy world filled with death, monsters, pain, magic, you get the idea.

After his tragic death, William Connor, the MC, was transported against his own will into a fantasy world. Left with no choice, he has to be able to survive in this terrible world by relying on his smarts(if he had any) and a system.

There is nothing that our MC is unable to craft. Be it armor, weapons, machines, he can do it all, as long as he has the materials and knowledge to craft it. It will not be easy, but he’ll manage because he’s the MC.

Deeply inspired by the two best games in the world ‘Minecraft’ and ‘Terraria’. If you haven’t played either of these games, then erase your fortnite account, download those games on your switch or your pc, and go watch Pewdiepie and Dream on YouTube. You will not be dis

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: DemonGodHiatus

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Literature Devourer The 1stRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Struggling through the seemingly endless expanse of chapter one, I find myself entangled in the beginning. The mc, is a familiar archetype of a 20-year-old basement dweller, lacks connection to reality. His implausible dream becoming YouTuber appears delusional and foreshadows some of future interaction, while exploiting parental love for indolent pursuit. Alas, progression beyond this initial chapter eludes me, as author fails to resonate with my taste. Regrettably, the novel lacks the flavor to satisfy my literary palate. Constructively, a more explaination of the protagonist's motivations and a swifter narrative pace in the opening chapter could enhance reader engagement.
And maybe,you can fullfill 5 out 9 of the formula for likeable character: courage, unfair injury, skill, funny, just plain nice, loved by friends and or family, in danger, hardworking, obsessed. But i seems can't see in the mc.
xsliegeRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Bad novel, period. Completely illogical, forced, nonsensical plots.
For example - MC goes to establish his base in the wild - but he can't be bothered to bring with him enough supplies, food and doesn't even bring seeds. Ok, so simple solution - go back (2-3 days journey) and buy more supplies, right? No - instead he wanders wasteland to 'find' someone to trade. And of course he doesn't use a map but searches randomly. And the map he bought was 200 years old and he didn't notice this fact - yeah right. Complete nonsense.