Impractical Magic

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Description

Our protagonist came from a broken family and because of that, made his life a total wreck. To top it off, while on his way home, he got shot and killed when he fought a robber.

He thought that it was the end. Until he was reincarnated into a different world of fantasy and magic. In which he had a loving family that raised him, the only problem is... He is now a She?!

On a certain event, she unlocked her personal magic which ignited the start of her adventure.

(Pardon if the earlier chapters were so short it is because this is my first time writing, this was corrected in future chapters/releases where I try to keep improving my work

This story is mostly centered in an anime like setting. I know that the story isn't interesting to some it is because I'm only aiming to a certain audience with the same interests and not being the jack of all trades.

To those who managed to read up to the latest chapters thank you for staying with me all the way despite of my lack of skill and some mistakes.

To those who dropped this after reading only a few thank you for reading and sorry for disappointing your expectations.

As I have said I am not a professional and I write this only during my spare time.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Writingonaphone

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 487
Views: 598,787

Chapters(114 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

Anonymously AmusedRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
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I think its quite pleasant to read dunno why some give bad star
Tbh by pleasant i mean it has good wording without any shit shit shit 💩 poop shit language
Well pov change a lot? Deal with it
Its make story funnier since we can know what the other chara see and think
Well if other find that unpleasant i suggest author to make separate chapter for the others pov as bonus chapter or side story or just like kumo desu nanika chaptering name
Mc is girly and not manly?
We know some people love guys too much but remember body affect mind
Environment too
Whoever you are girly manly boyly womanly oily
Depend on how you look like and hows your environment it will affect your personality
What? Man scared of insect is girly? Pls, insect is creepy as hell cause even i creeped out by it
Even ant
I suggest other than commenting the chara story and etc
Try give suggestions too
Spicyice101Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a really good story, I really like it. However, if there was one thing that I wish was fixed, that would be the character descriptions. We have almost no description of Blake except that he is tall, and while we have Angelica’s “sizes”, we don’t have her height. If you could describe the characters with more than just “tall”, maybe even include a numerical value, that would be great. I like to imagine characters facing their challenges mentally, and that’s hard to do without specific descriptions.
ps, if you don’t plan to add this to the story, can you pm me their heights or somthing?
-Thank You.
edit - as you have added heights to the characters in chapter 4, I’m adding a bit more to character score.
WickianRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I'm about 2/3 of the way through the current chapters and the story is enjoyable if you're looking for something to kill a few days reading.
It has some annoying tropes I'm not a fan of but are low key enough to not be overbearing and although the characters are nothing special they aren't a pain to read through either.
This is unlikely to become one of the stories that has you eagerly awaiting the next update, but it isn't a waste of time to read either if the summary interests you.
I'll be generous since I'm between stories and give it a 4/5 since it's accomplished what I wanted it to do.
CalaventeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This read is interesting.
however, I'd say that the MC seems to have been quite sheltered in his previous life... or he forgets really easily that he's now a girl ! (he doesn't have a mind "dirty" enough for a guy that was a teenager in our world with easy access to internet)
As a preference I'm not keen on the difference of POV that we see early in the story : it often repeats things that we know already, most often with the exact same words. (the additional interest of the POV is often only a few sentences out of a dozen paragraphs !)
However this "weakness" is cured in the latest chapters : the POV become more normal : a different POV to show the scene, without much overlap, unless needed.
Further I like the take on the world / on the story /... I really hope (s)he scores on maria :D
grammar and vocabulary are kept simple, but no obvious mistakes are made.
Story telling is also simple and straightforward, but for a 1st story it's good enough.
TheDarkMistRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Its good but the mc can be too much of a baby girl sometimes and its hard to think the mc is a guy sometimes
So a 3.5 to a 4 cant say that it is a 4 but idk if it's a 3.5 either so just give it a try I guess
Capitao CavernaRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Well the POV change on the first chapters annoyed the hell out of me and, quite frankly, could be deleted entirely.
Now for the MC... he is far too girly I mean in the prologue he was supposed to be from a bad family and be a rebel capable of turning around and beating the face of a robber because he is pissed off but then, when he becomes a girl, he doesn't curse, he is far too inocent, he is afraid of insects, he doesn't really resist using skirts... sometimes it's like he has never been a man.
Also the childhood arc is far too fast, it's like 'so he was born, when he was 3 this happens, when he was 10 this happen, then he turned 13, then he turned 14" When he spoke about Blake the first time I had no Idea who it was it came out of the blue.
Now I don't actualy like childhood arcs but if you're gonna gloss over it like that you may as well star from when he turned 14 or something... I have read some novels like that and it works.
So if you want a better score I highly suggest changing the beginning of your story to either show the MC growth better or skipping everything there and starting from when he met the first monster, write more details man it would make this much better
Don't take this as me saying your story is crap, it isn't, it's kind of fun and pass the time but the MC acting too much like a girl when I expect him to be a man sometimes annoy the hell out of me and the first POV change to blake nearly made me drop it
Also don't take the 3 stars as me being a troll... too many ppl in RR give stars based on their feelings like, if they see something they don't like they imediately give a half stars or if they see an overpowered MC fulfilling all their fantasies they give it a 5 and that isn't good.
To me your story is worth 3 stars... if you take out the first pov and change the prologue for him to be more girly even as a man, write some more details or something it could be worth 4 stars.
5 stars are much harder, if I ave ever read 10 stories in RR trully
Waffle(est)Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
I got to about chapter 8 and couldn't continue on.
Characters act in very strange and illogical manner displaying comically bad judgement. The characters actions seem to not have the slightest relation to their back stories. Everything that happens just seems so implausible that its is impossible to get immersed in the story, even with extra fantasy allowances.
Things happen because the author wants them to but rarely is the effort put in to make it seem natural. characters behave in inconsistent and strange ways to further the plot.
Oh and then there is the growing 10 years in 2 sentenceas bit? this probalby won't have a longlasting effect on the rest of the story .. but wtf? After spending a full chapter describing his first 2 years of life the rest is just skipped?
SennoRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Dont like mc to much of a girl and i didn't see Litrpg in 15 chapters if you dont have it the story then dont use tag im angry wasted time reading this.