Immortal

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Description

In the world of Etheria there exist magic. All types of races you can imagine and in this world, the strong dominate the weak.In this world only five known people achieved the Immortality. Immortality makes them young forever and allows them to never die from age. But they can die, if they are killed.Most of the immortals are known mostly as powerful Elders, even if they don't look old, and stay inside their houses or clan's improving every second they can to achieve what they want. The God Realm.The story follows the First Immortal, and the youngest one achieving immortality, who can't die even if she tries. She's the first to reach the peak of cultivation, the God Realm.It's not because she reached the God Realm, that she can't die, it's just that she was blessed with a great power. Her body heals right away when it's damaged. Sometimes it doesn't even show the wound. And let's just say that she is a women full of secrets and surprises.""" I've been stabbed in the heart before. I've been shot by magic, multiple times. I'm fine now, but I wouldn't recommend it."""" ~ AthaliaFollow Athalia VÃ©lios, two hundred year old Immortal/Goddess, as she has fun in the world she actually didn't know as much as she thought.- Still don't know if I will add the mature tag- I don't own the photo, don't mind that thingy she has on her eyebrows. Ignore it xD

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Gallexier

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.2/ 5.0
Followers: 89
Views: 122,713

Chapters(103 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

MrGrassRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Way, way to fast. There are 6 time skips in the first 2 chapters. Which is an interesting choice, but what makes it a bad choice, is that it isn't a recap.
The content is fine, even if a bit sparse. The chapters need to have more meat. It has potential, but it need to be rewritten.
TheGreatGertRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I like the idea and I like the pace of the story. I also like how time passes since our MC is immortal. The MC also gets stronger quickly and isn't stupid or naive. All in all the story is quite good but still rough at the edges. For example, sometimes not much is explained, or things happen that are completely random. I also don't understand the story very good (but it can also be me because i'm not a native speaker) or a few things are alos pretty rush.
Ziggy11Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
I feel like the story has a lot of potential but it goes way to fast and becomes overpowered way to quickly. The idea of manipulating the soul in the prologue was really interesting but it was just used as an intro to the story when it had a lot of potential. Overall the story just lacks any real conflict, sure John faces some difficulties here and there and dies a few times but there is never any real suspense, just the knowledge that John will win easily.
LightNovelNoviceRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
The concepts and ideas in the story are very interesting and fun, but they are not given time to bake nor are they used in such a way that the reader can appreciate them properly.
Being able to manipulate and shape souls is interesting, but that is just part of the prologue, not the rest of the story.
Immortality is interesting in this story, but the powers and techniques our protagonist develops aren't used in any sort of combat or dangerous situation. There is no conflict, and the pacing doesn't allow for the reader to soak in the cool abilities and their ramifications.
Personally I really hope the author rewrites this story after having practiced some restraint when it comes to pacing. This looks like it could turn out to be a great story if given more room to breath and more time to develop.
Thank you for your work, Author!