Immortal's Journey with the Goddess

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Description

Kaiser, an orphan with modest expectations, thought life was simple. You study, get a job, and eventually start a family in a peaceful yet fiercely competitive world. As an ordinary student, he went with the flow—until his high school graduation arrived.

That’s when everything changed.

Due to the incompetence of the gods, all the graduates were summoned to another world, each blessed with unique gifts. But for Kaiser, things took a strange turn.

"Why on earth do I have to take care of the very goddess who caused this mess?!"

What I cooked:

-An MC that doesn't die—don't expect him to think and deal with situation like normal person would. If the goal is getting down the mountain fast, he'll literally jump down. But he's not stupid... Just different.

-Comedy—better not be drinking or eating when reading this. Btw, you might also cry, be warned.

-Weak to strong... I mean, he literally can't die, so even though he's not blessed with talents, despised by fate, and chased by misfortune. He had no choice but to get stronger.

-Worlds and creatures that came from my dreams and nightmares... Mostly, nightmares.

Read chapter 1; https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/95652/immortals-journey-with-the-goddess/chapter/1844492/chapter-1-graduation-from-normality

Give it a try, thanks!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Caile

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 142
Views: 96,784

Chapters(146 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

0njk00Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
im not good writer but when i saw this novel havent seen the attention it deserve i just want to do anything that i can.
its an awesome novel and i really hope anyone that see this novel to give it a try because they arent going to regret there choice. lovely mc lovely power and awesome and joke.100 from 10!.*
although i dont like the dadyy problem (relationships) but it has its own comedy and i believe that its gonna be ok (based on the sobs of the blind),
in the end just wanted to say love you caile and im rooting for you to excel beyond expectations
Hammer burgerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This novel literally surprised me. I thought it'll be your average book written by some random author that could pump up 2 satisfactory length chapters daily. Not too long, not too short.
I didn't expect much from the story, honestly, and I first found it hilarious, I laughed more than I can count reading this. Which is a big point in my opinion, because fictions are meant to be enjoyed. However, after reading the first volume, I came to understand how deep this was written. It's funny, but there's actual plotting, and honestly, I'm quite good at predicting where a story goes just by the hints but this took me off guard, I literally didn't saw those reveals and developments.
The characters are flesh out, think rationally and not easy to sway, I like how the world around the MC doesn't rotate around him to complement him. But to make him learn in an entertaining way, some characters are even smarter than him. The world they're in is strangely new, too. Not much is revealed yet, all I can say is that there's a freaking sea in the sky.
The MC's cheat is also commendable, its badass and OP, but also balance. His immortality let him revived after dying, letting him fail over and over again and again strength in the way. It's like he had an exclusive power to fail, and I agree that failure is a good teacher. It makes his earned powers deserving because he died for it, and in my speculations, Kaiser would probably die over a thousand times before he gets so overpowered.
The MC himself is likable, his like the introverted friend that's timid at first but when you came to knew him, he's the craziest mf there is. Death is beneath him, literally. And I like how his just a average person with good brains that have the luxury to fail and try again, what really commendable about him is that, Kai would get up everytime he fail, no matter how painful and excruciating dying is. And when the author said he's not dumb but just thought different, dear author is right.
And I swear, an I
IchelRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Hello dear Reader of this review,
First Things First, I'm terrible at writing reviews so do Not expect anything from me.
So, this Story ist interesting. Having a random teenage boy suddenly brought to a new world and telling him to Take care of a goddess is something I haven't Seen yet (wait, i did. I'm writing the review for it). The Charakter also doesn't have anything Special going for him (except immortality) but I am talking about Talent, being really smart or Things Like that.
The only Thing i should warn you about are some Problems with the grammar but i do Not know If the author will correct them and you can probably Just ignore them anyway.
I wish you a wonderful read If you give this a chance even though my review problay didn't Help you.
SleptRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I think this story, while a little bit clichè, is a pretty fun read.
The MC is effectively immortal, so instead of worrying about the death of MC I find most of the tension in the story comes from the horrors the MC goes/could go through, and the other developing characters and their struggles and interactions.
The characters are good. They each have their own motivations and desires and act on them. I will say there are quite a few female characters with relations (not romantic, so far) involving the MC and I don't see a romance or harem tag.
World building is good. Lots of potential for exploration and lore,
It's kind of like an absurd amount of pocket dimensions all connected to one another, each containing different terrain, races and cultures. Could be awesome if executed right.
Progression system is decent. It takes a while to be explained and even now there are lots of unknowns so I'm keen to find out more about it.
No complaints about grammar from me.
Overall a fun read so far and looking forward to more. Keep it up author!
fras royal road.Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
A wonderful story that deserves more attention. I hope you continue. You cannot predict the events. It is clear that the writer worked hard on the story. Thank you for your wonderful work. I love all the Characters of the story It's clear from the beginning that I'm looking forward to the future. Please continue.
chaddy-Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I’ll start off with the fact the story feels fresh and characters feel real. The issue most stories face is the fact they make the MC go through scenarios where he suffers/pathetic/inactive and the MC can be those things but don’t put him in scenarios where the readers start hating the story/mc. The MC goes through tribulations but it makes one like him more or the story except twice. Biggest issue is we have no idea what MC’s ability is. One year and my curiosity piqued all to go on Hiatus and it’s a favor to all readers so you don’t get your hopes up when you’re guaranteed to be disappointed. The strength of the stories lie in the characters some say it’s funny I didn’t laugh once but I enjoyed my time reading it. It’s a mix of wholesomeness and brutality with growth through training although the title states he jumps off a cliff to grow it honestly couldn’t be further from the truth. He does progress and adapts to the pain and the MC is too selfless for my taste too soft and too dumb. I like him you root for him and you can’t help but feel for him.