Immortal Love in the Dark

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Peace will never prevail over Rothnia until blood has been spilled, the prophecy said. And for peace, Kieran Allendale, the King of Rothnia, must sacrifice his people or his love.

With all the dark forces coming out of their hibernation, Kieran has to make a choice all over again.

But amidst the danger, there lies a hidden enemy with an entirely different agenda that would crumble Kieran's world completely.

How will Kieran overcome the precarious situation? Will he be able to save his love as well as his subjects? But before that, will he get the love he has been seeking for a long time?

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Meanwhile, Irene finds herself in a strange land after an accident, and since then, her life has been anything but normal. Having no idea where she is and how she got there, Irene is now in another body, who everyone addresses as Sylvaine. And to her horror, the land is dominated by creatures she once considered a fantasy.

Desperate to return to her old life, she tries everything she can, only to meet the man who has been haunting her dreams even before she became Sylvaine. Who is he, and what does he want from her? Why is he so mysterious and dark and possessive about her?

All Irene wants is to get away from him, but the man has other intentions: To make her his for eternity.

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  • IxtaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    This is a decent start to another transmigration story.  It feels quite similar to the beginnings of many others I've read (truck-kun got another one!) but I wouldn't say that the set up is lacking.  A young businesswoman gets killed in an accident and wakes up as the daughter of a duke... but the mysterious dreams give this story its own twist.  The pacing of events is good, and the author adds in a lot of details to begin building the setting and the character.  Unfortunately, I believe the dialogue needs refining and, specifically, the MC's internal dialogue can feel clunky at times.  She has a habit of asking herself overly simplistic questions quite frequently, which makes her sound less intelligent than I think the author intends the character to be.  In my opinion, using less direct thought and more indirect thought or free indirect speech would probably flow a bit better.