I would do anything for love...
Self-Published
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Description
When genius is married to madness, when there is nothing to lose but everything to gain, can destiny be changed?
A short story in a planned universe, maybe I'll do more with it.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Tsaimath
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 13
- Views
- 1,856
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- generic nameRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Meh, that's my initial response to this little one-shot. It's not really great, kinda good, and not exactly bad. The story is pretty Meh, and I think this could be attributed to the fact that the author didn't really use the fact that this story was a short one shot to their advantage. This just feels like a scene taken out of a full sized story, it doesn't really feel like it's using it's size in a good way. As an example, short-stories usually have twist endings, because that helps them stay in the audiences mind longer, despite the short size. I'm not saying this would work for your story, just using it as an example
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The distant and vague prose and the short piece works against itself to make this for a confusing finale of sorts. Just getting grounded in the setting and what is happening would require more work if the prose is kept like this. It does not appeal to our senses as much and that makes it readable but harder to process. An interesting short story that is more of a teaser for a larger work.
- MK bk-201Royal Road★★★ 3.0Meh, it feels like either a prologue to a slice of life story or a after story about a villain trying to revive a lost one, it was not bad, but without a lot more context it really dosent has anything that draws one to read this, take this however you want.