I Woke Up As A Girl?!
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Enter the story of teenage delinquent, Taku Yamato, who is on a journey to becoming the number one yakuza in all of Japan.
Until he wakes up one day with the face of his crush?! What's more is that he is now her big sister?!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- pu77
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 62
- Views
- 10,560
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- AgasthenesRoyal Road★★ 2.0Okay I gues. This story is written in the " lightnovel translation style " as I call it. Not sure why anybody would want to but here we are.
Grammar and spelling seems OK, but I am no native speaker, so maybe I just didn't notice errors.
Premise of the story is nothing new. But wtf is a delinquent supposed to be? The description of the story needs to be revisited. This is not the story of a delinquent that becomes the yakusa no. 1. This is the story of a guy waking up in a girl's body and then trying to become yakuza no. 1.
Autor uses some strange and useless description. "he looked at here with an intense face" what is that supposed to mean?
All I found the premise interesting but the execution is lacking. Lightnovelese is just not my style I can tolerate it in a translation but writing the original in that style is just wrong in my eyes.
Wight that said if you like that you could very well enjoy the story.
I hope I don't discourage the Autor, keep going!