I will create a kemono paradise!

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

Kai-sensei

• Chapter 2
  May 20, 2019
• Chapter 1
  May 19, 2019
• Chapter 5: welcome to the land of the drunkards
  Jul 13, 2017
• Chapter 4: the drunken tanuki
  Jul 10, 2017
• Chapter 3: the kemono kingdom
  Jul 8, 2017
• Chapter 2: my first slave, and a way out
  Jul 8, 2017
• Chapter 1: summoned to a different world, and the fox queen
  Jul 7, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• Yami SeekerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Although he is practically right but that does not mean he can give you a flat out half star. He can play bad cop and I can play good cop. Either way, he is right and I would also be disappointed if it suddendly turned into the opposite I wanted. Heck! I would rage quit.
  Even so, the story is quite choppy since it didn't even describe how they got out. Also, the throneroom is nice and all. Tells us we are in a csatle but what kind of castle? How does the place look like? Is it the usual medieval or something or another.
  No transititions and the Queen found out how? By the time she knew he was already outside even though they could not get out easily... (Probably) Won't the guards find him suspicious being technicaly "Black hair and eyes" seemed to be rare?
  Well, although I don't want to discourage you but there are quite a few problems.
  Thank you for listening to my complains. And hope this helps too.
• RznRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  The opening of this was really kind of disturbing, though the setting and terminology seem to have significant issues as well. The awkward comments from the MC's narration towards women is rather grotesque and I feel that sensitive content warning should be added. The story does get a little better, but it still is rather disturbing. The prose is rough, a copyedit would help though the MC's thought process is horrid.
• DaigumaRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  Subjective Part:
  I am disappointed. I have been waiting for stories with anthropomorphic characters for quite a long time. As you can see, and know, beastkins, demihumans, beastmans--whatever you call them--are just humans with ears and tails. Which is sorely lacking. Why can't there be animals with human body structure? And then you used the kemono word. I was excited. But then I read it and discovered that it was just kemomimis.
  Let me explain:
  Kemonos come from the word kemonobito(beastman) which is a portmanteau of kemono(beast) and hito(person). They are animals with human body structure. Which means they have human-like arms and torsos, they are biped(most of the time), but they are covered in fur, their heads are like the animal they were based from, and size too.
  Now, let's talk about kemomimi or kemonomimi. It is a portmanteau of kemono(beast) and mimi(ears). They are humans with ears like the animals they were based from, although tails are also present most of the times. They may or may not have the increased senses from their beast blood.
  Objective Part:
  The story is too rushed because of the lack of transitions. From one errant thought to another, it feels choppy. Paragraohs are just one sentence, and there is a lack of spacing. Second chapter is a pure wall of text. And the MC mostly describes the girls and their beauty. From the way the things are written, a harem is not a surprsing development, especially with the sexual content tag and his ability to make living beings his slave. You could even say that the world and power is perfectly tailored for a pervert. But I would not judge that.
  Anyway, if the author wants to improve his story, longer sentences, coherence and cohesion of lines and thoughts, proper transitioning, and descriptions would do make magic for the story.