I was reincarnated on the One piece World

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Description

An ex marine officer who was fired by the government was executed with death penalty for case of theft of private and secret documents in the Pentagon of United States and being a part of International Terrorists Isis.

Unfortunately, all of this was just an alleged accusation. Despite of his prestige and good record in marine, he was still sentence to death.

Before he died, he just remembered his favorite anime One piece. Remembering Whitebeards word, he terribly shouted his dying will.

" ONE PIECE EXIST....ONE PIECE IS REAL ".

Yet, soon as he knows that his death had arrived, his body trembled and an unconscious calmness covered him. He was like a golden Buddha who had reached Nirvana. Facing Death with out regret.

Later he find himself in another world, a world where in he himself is very familiar off. He wonders around it and saw a huge crowd around the corridor of every street.

On his way he saw a tall execution platform.

Yun , cannot believe what lies in his sight.

For right in front of him was none other than the famous execution platform, where the said pirate king was slain.

The platform where Pirate King Gol D Roger was executed..

The Logue Town..

Jason an ordinary exmarine was revived on the Real One Piece World...

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: DionfhelCuyno(Verde)

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Rating: 2.1/ 5.0
Followers: 235
Views: 539,420

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Community Reviews(10)

Icecold543Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Like it a lot. Plz continue. When he gonna get the devil fruit?
SudraRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The grammer is terrible, the story is repugnant, the characters are iffy at best. But this guy published 135 pages of work in 7 days. (Assuming he didn't have them saved up from before) That's ridiculous.
Whether or not the story is actually good, thanks for putting in the time to write it. I hope to see this author improve and publish something of higher quality soon.
jvjhatredRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Awesome SI. Write more please. hehehe
KaminarionRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I kind of liked this. Good try.
You should take this story as the base and try enriching it and rebuilding.
I personally didn't like the refival fruit or the abuse of fruit powers. Or the fact that he suddenly gained a huge crew without it being introduced like One Piece did.
I hope you continue and make a very interesting story.
waterbear06Royal Road
★★ 1.5
Youve taken a great story and youve made it a genuine pain to read. I dont understand how youre grammar can be so bad, even if you are using a mobile device to type it all out. I also hate how you will show so many pages from the manga, basically you are following the story of the manga with out truly putting your own spin on it. If you loosely based your story on the manga, fixed your grammar, and focused more on Jason then you could easily have a five star story.
LuckylynxRoyal Road
★ 0.5
I can't fathom why people give this 4+ stars. I'm sorry to say, but this story is actually hard to read. There is no engaging plot, no characters who I understand their role in the story (including our main character without a truly consistent name), and the number of errors piling on one another only subrtact from any appeal this story may give.
DevourerRoyal Road
★ 0.5
better read a one piece manga than reading your story, there is no really good story development all the time its like a fillers of a side character that have no character building except the absurd training by which no point because he’s a freaking no face side character, meaning your mc have no plotline, except being a side character. XD
James650Royal Road
★ 0.5
The story starts out rough with the grammer but I love one piece so I toughed it through and it just got worse and worse. The main character has no personality and somehow can hold his breath underwater almost indefinitely while being a normal human. The story kept just time skipping and making the main character some weird of godly strong character without really experiencing anything.
My main issue with the story is towards chapter 30 or so the story isn’t about the mc anymore. His name is mentioned for a line while the author just summarizes one piece while posting loads of manga pages.
Chopsuey332Royal Road
★ 0.5
I cannot fathom on why people are giving this fiction 4+ stars so I will be doing an actual review. I will be harsh yet truthful.
1, The grammar is horrible, it’s not at the “get an editor then it will be fine” every sentence has 2+ grammatical errors in it.
2, Overuse of punctuation to try and achieve an effect that should be narrated(lots of ... !!! ,. .. .. .. and more .. .. .. and .. )
3, Constant time skip and redundancy that leaves the reader confused and annoyed.
4, Tries to incorporate everything that goes on in the world resulting in constant SUMMARIES of what’s going on with Luffy and taking away from the MC.
5, Extremely unrealistic training time and abilities(hold breath underwater for 10 hours while training even though he’s a human 10yo kid)
6, Linear MC that we have no reason to be attached to. Nothing appealing about him.
7, and many many more, it’s everything bad that you would see in a novel.
Pro(singular): lots of pictures to show the characters.
Noble ReaderRoyal Road
★ 0.5
If not for the review I would give it a 0.
The fiction is basically following the original story 1/1, while our "MC" (Not sure if he is supposed to be one anymore) follows Luffy around in the shadows and helps him out.
We have no idea why the MC was executed, who framed him or anything else. He just reincarnated in One Piece and trained for god knows how many years while constantly being eaten by sea kings.
Our "strong" "MC" never made a proper appearance even once.
The grammar is horrendous.
We also have strange moments where "MC" struggles with normal marine soldiers, but can easily fight an Admiral...like what the f*ck.