I was reincarnated as the chopped hand of a fallen hero of a destroyed ruined world

Information

Status

Hiatus

Author

Hau-Sensei

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• KudrelRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Okay, let me try to be as fair as possible. This has the potential to be a great story. However the writing and Grammer leaves a ton to be desired. It feels like it was translated with Google translate.
  Editing, I could not read any further because of text color changes.
  System is a ton of boxes that tell you the same information. 10 boxes say he raised some fish. 10 boxes saying he upgraded them. No struggle in the early chapters.
  He kills a boss fish by stopping it from breathing. He reasons that because he's undead he has a greater affinity for water. Greater than something that literally lives in water...
  He chose to make the mc a necromancer than changed his mind and wanted a warrior. Plot armor to make him be able to do both.
  This is a necromancer who decides to throw away being a better caster to be a warrior.  Then gets plot armor to stay a necromancer.  This is a personal pet peeve, so up to you to take this criticism.
  Overall this has a ton of potential but needs a ton of editing. Keep working on this and if a overhaul is done I'll be more than happy to try once more. I kept reading because I hopped it would get better, we all have read stories where the early chapters need a ton of work but the author gets better.