I was Born the Unloved Twin

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Description

You've probably heard this sort of story before.

Once upon a time, blah blah blah a boy and a girl fell love and everything was beautiful and perfect, except for this thing called life getting in their way.

He was this cool foreign prince and she was basically perfect. Really it's a very boring run of the mill story. I'll even spoil it for you, they kill the villainess at the end.

Not the type of story I'd read personally.

So where do I fit into this?Apparently I'm her older twin sister and the very very lucky fiance to the foreign prince. You know, the dead villainess? Sucks I know. Now I get to do it all over again from the beginning.Curse my life

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So you're somewhat interested in what this thing is about and looking to see if it's even worth reading?

Let's get the worst of it out of the way first: This is a boring story, very tedious, mundane and downright just boring. It's too slow, the characters are too confusing & make possibly retarded choices. It's an isekai/reborn type Slice of Life novel that plays on the villainess noble girl trope but the MC gets no OP cheats, no magical powers, not even some satisfying face slapping or such self-fulfillment fantasy. Wow, I'm doing a terrible job advertising this thing.

If you're somehow still interested, if you were ever interested how an average modern person, reborn with all their host's memories, could live out their life in this situation, mending personal relationships one step at a time, or wondered what happened in between all the time skips in other novels, maybe give Unloved Twin a try.

This is an awkward novel, the pacing is slow, and there is no time skips. For some reason still, I really love this little story I'm making.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: CCmei

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 499
Views: 474,672

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Community Reviews(10)

Andrew MeyersRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Very heartwarming and it feels like a native English version of "But God Forced Me to Reincarnate," but so far we're only in the early parts of life and only have ten chapters to go on.
Style: Well paced, fairly good flow to the narrative.
Grammar: Good, a small number of typos or incorrect punctuation here and there (poleite instead of polite). Otherwise easy to read.
Characters: Excellent so far, we'll see how they develop.
Story: We're at chapter 10, but so far it seems pretty good. I'm hooked unless there are some seriously dynamic changes in the story I'll probably read through to the end.
SilverSliverRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is definitely one of my favorite slice of life stories, I love the characters and their interactions so much. My only complaint is I feel like I don't know the world beyond the mansion still
TywamiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's a great heartwarming second (third) life story it has okay pacing and a great main character
librarysmilesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
What would you do if you had not one, not two, but three chances at life? Thought it sounded good? Tricks on you!
Life #1: Villainess of an Otome game.
Story: Once upon a time there were twin grandaughters of the Hero (earlier japanese isekai). The younger daughter, Lilyanne, the "dawn of light" was proclaimed the "good" twin, the heroine of the otome story. The older daughter, Rosalia, born before midnight, was touted as a villianess. The villainess was engaged to prince Erik. ... Rosalia encountered a "bad end".
Life #2: Modern day victim
Meng Diuhua works a LOT and is given more work because she can "handle it". Mengmeng sees bartender Jung-Joon as a brother and brushes off his attempts to woo her as "flirting" even though he is serious. Jung-Joon works as a bartender for his older brother alongside a couple cannon fodders in this modern day tale. ... It's hinted that MengMeng has serious troubles, but we don't know them yet or why/how she died.
Life #3: Rosalia's Third Chance
Rosalia is born back into life #1 with leftover memories from life #1 and #2. Life #3 follows Rosalia's rabbit trail actions and thoughts, such as how to cook good food, as she runs away from facing her very real emotional issues.
In Life #3 we see a complex backstory and why a fairy tail is not a clear-cut story when viewed from slice of life ups and downs.
Warning: Don't expect a moving plot! The whole point of this story seems to be the rambling slice of life stream of consciousness.
My favorite part about this story is how the author makes me invest a LOT of emotion into EVERY single character.
Expect a mixed soup of content delivery!
DarknessRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story is a really great reincarnation story with all the flaws that actually people would have. The character have so much depth and personality. The story is really well done! Also the story has good humor and can make you laugh and cry. Definitely a must read story! I enjoy it immensely.
Hello I am MullenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Wonderful story, well written it's not fast paced or action packed (so far) and that's fine instead its engaging and tugs on your emotions the right amount.
Theres no boring, long winded exposition just a brief period of confusion as we are introduced to our MC which quickly resolves itself as we experience the world right alongside her.
As the Author makes it clear in her intro this story might not be for you but give it a go because if it is you'll love it.
Thank you for reading and Author thanx for writing, I wish you all the best and have a good one.
NuuxRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It has some of the cliche reincarnations into an Otome typesetting, but not a lot. You can grow to like the main character since she's rather naive and cute still even if it's a second life, and fits right well with the story.
As the other person that reviewed has some good points... so I will just say my views on it.
Style: like the other person stated it's paced pretty well and you can get the narrative of the story quite easily. the other backgrounds in the story aren't superimposed on, nor is there a lot of un-needed filler. at least of right now.
Grammar: well I am not a good judge on this... but it's decent probably better than mine at least so let's just go with the other persons view on it minor errors here and there and easy to read unlike some stories around these parts.
Characters: all of them seem to have some uniqueness to them. None seems to be too... marry jane type as of yet. Has a good setting to even develop the side characters or other leads though it doesn't concentrate on them too much, at least you can spot minor development from the way the story is narrated.
Story: seems to be planed out, for the most part, I am only on chapter 19 as far as it goes so far and it seems to pick up on other characters motives, not by a lot but it can get you hooked with the first few chapters.
Melvin WongRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's a great read and the slower pace really does give you time to develop a good understanding of the characters. At this point, I'm actually quite invested.
However, I do think that it's time to move things along. The biggest issue that this story has is the time limit and inevitable clash that is to come.
Right now, you have a heartwarming slice of life story, but eventually, it will have to change. There is a bigger overarching plot here and the longer the story drags on, the less relevant it seems to become.
With over 100 chapters, readers pretty much know who to root for now. The author just needs to point them in the right direction.
vladeragRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I like this story a lot. The mix of reincarnation and transmigration creates a very interesting type of novel.
However, I absolutely despise the characters in it. I can barely even articulate just how much I hate them. Every single character is an asshole of epic proportions; the single most selfish and unlovable bastards I've ever witnessed in writing - and none of it is intentional!
No, I'm supposed to like the quirky grandfather who abandons a two year old girl in the woods and tells her to survive for three days and he will pick her up. Except he fucking lied and was late by an extra two days at least, plus another nine days where he can't find her for a grand total of fourteen days.
Or what about when that grandfather throws the kids on a raft and let's them get eaten - yes, eaten - by giant fish? Oh, that's so silly! What wacky thing will be do next!?
How about the kid named Lukas, who desperately needs someone - anyone - to show him some discipline? I've lost count of the dangerous shit he has done, and his incessant bullshit talking is incredibly angering. Did I mention he nearly suffocated the protagonist to death with a pillow? hOw QuIrKy! No! It isn't quirky! It isnt funny! It's life and death!
I could go on and enumerate the character flaws for every single character, bit I won't because I will only get more and more angry. I hate them. I hate every single one of them and I am desperately hoping many of them will die painfully.
And yet... I'm still reading this web novel. I don't even fully understand why. I obviously like it, or I wouldn't keep reading it, and yet how can I like it when I hate them so much!? I don't understand. I just don't understand.
It's a good web novel though.
AthyriumRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The intro is intriguing, the MC is interesting, and it starts with so much potential..... and then it all goes down the drain and nothing is done with it. Where is the plot? Where is the progression? Why are they letting a two year old make massive decisions?!? It started fun... and then nothing ever happened.
If the MC ever gained any power or accomplished anything it would be so good, but she doesn't. It's just a constant beat down on this poor girl. Over and over again. I guess the author warned us, but I expected something to happen to make the MC interesting, but it never does.