I've waited my whole life for this THE Apocalypse /Dropped/

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

Full Hard

• Chapter 9, Choosen one /Edited 2018.03.28/
  Aug 27, 2017
• Chapter 8, First Skill Book /Edited 2018.03.27/
  Aug 23, 2017
• Chapter 7, Euphoric /Edited 2018.03.27/
  Aug 22, 2017
• Chapter 6.5, Choose what drug will use
  Aug 20, 2017
• Chapter 6,Preperation and first wave /Edited 2018.03.27/
  Aug 20, 2017
• Chapter 5.5, Some Picture Info
  Aug 19, 2017
• Chapter 5, At last home /Edited 2018.03.27/
  Aug 19, 2017
• Chapter 4, Coward /Edited 2018.03.27/
  Aug 18, 2017
• Chapter 3, Survivors and obstacle /Edited 2018.03.26/
  Aug 17, 2017
• Chapter 2, Stupid prick /Edited 2018.03.26/
  Aug 17, 2017
• Chapter 1, Skill and Stash /Edited 2018.03.26/
  Aug 16, 2017
• Prologue/Edited 2018.03.26/
  Aug 16, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(4)

• FlerkifyRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  You need to improve both your sentence structure and your grammer. The characters are not developed and your descriptors need work. It seems like you rushed this story. I suggest getting a beta reader.
• Makata PlumaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  The story is good and I like the fact that the mc is a japanese man wjth the balls to actualy kill someone.
  The big, and I mean BIG PROBLEM is that your grammar is on par if not worse than google translate. If you cant fix your grammar then at least hire someone who will fix your typos and grammatical mistakes.
  If you can fix the grammar problem then Ill gladly give you a 5.
• I Don't Bite...Royal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  my native language is not English, and I do have doubts about my grammatical skills and dialect skills. so i won't talk about them, but let's talk about the actual story.
  the premise of a post-apocalyptic zombie world is interesting, though I personally do not like zombie fiction. however, the characters ruin the story. they are shallow, one dimensional, and don't add anything to the story or the plot if there is indeed a plot there.
  it feels like one of those badly written xianxia or xuanhuan novels where the mc exists to show off how thoughtlessly cruel, bloody and self-justifying they can be, and every other character exists solely to give him a chance to show off his badassery. there are also a lot o random happenings there that aren't really well thought out. in the whole, it all feels very disjointed.
  if you are actually writing because you find it interesting and not just to put some words on paper without much thought, you should invest a little more time thinking about your characters.
  even a psychopath has the reasoning of a psychopath. you gave your mc the moniker of 'joker'. I might be wrong but you perhaps got at least some inspiration from batman. but batman's joker is a very complex character. even though he calls himself 'a dog chasing cars' but his capability of planning and manipulating others is far above others.
  so think a bit abought your 'characters', and give them some actual characters. its easy enough to do if you add a little mental struggles and stuff. think about the events too before you put them. organize them a little better.
• camperbeeRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  i really do like the idea of your story,
  but it was hard to read.
  most of your if not all your sentence structures were wrong.
  you had missing words and bla bla bla
  But dont let this discourage you~
  keep on improving and i'm sure you'll be a fine author soon~