I Stole Zeus's Computer!
Self-Published
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Description
After Tartarus was destroyed, Zeus creates a computer that could grant an infinite amount of wishes. But Hera snatches his computer and accidentally drops it into the human world. The computer ends up in Jinpachi's hands. Instead of ruling the world or taking over Zeus's throne, he uses it to spur all kinds of drama at his school and home.
This is the capital of incest, taboo, love, and drama!
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Credits For The Cover
https://www.pinterest.jp/pin/334110866087355434/
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Skitten
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 29
- Views
- 22,251
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- Mr_OneeChanRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I guess it's unique in a way...
Little too harsh and unacceptable THEMYSTOGRIGEN. - Forgiv3n324Royal Road★★★ 3.0Alright both reviews are trash in the sense that neither of the two are reviews but purely just stating their opinion and giving either a .5/5 or perfect 5/5 rating this story deserves neither of the two as it isn't abysmal enough to get .5 but this is not perfect story quality deserving of 5/5 thats just bullshit.
Now on to the review as THEMSTOGRIGEN so kindly told everyone, there is little to no content as of yet, but if you've read enough you can kind of get the just of were this is going to end up as.
so style gets a 3/5 because the fact that the author even has the balls to release these 'chapters' and then say in the comments not 'chapters' but 'episodes' like the hell? So instead of a .5 ill give you an extra 2.5 stars for that.
Story: Little to nothing as of yet but the gods are just reused greek gods that we've all seen a thousand times
Grammar actually isn't too bad granted he hasn't typed much so it wouldnt be hard to proof read that shit a few times ( LOL )
Character score: this is the only one were becaues there is not enough content I can't really say but just go with the middle ground
Now there an actual review was that so hard? ( yea it was I don't get paid enough for this shit ) - MisterNobleRoyal Road★ 0.5Too short, boring.....episode doesn't give you the right to make the whole chap a single paragraph sprinkled with more sentences
- themystogrigenRoyal Road★ 0.5Seriously, how is it that the synopsis and chapters have the same size, yet the synopsis has more content?
The synopsis paints a pretty picture of a kid with an object that grants infinite wishes, and will sow all sorts of drama, discord, and lemons...
Yet we get served chapters with two dialogue lines and half the content served as descriptions. 100-200 words do not make a chapter. The main character most likely won't show up for another two months, and add on another month for the laptop to show up.
I'll come back in a week or two to see if this is still an issue and will edit it.