I reluctantly became the dungeon master
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Description
John Mullard works on a game software company. His life is extremely normal until one day, a thief has sneaked into the house and killed him. He was taken to another world by a man claiming to be a god and promising to reborn him. but ironically he became the master of the dungeon. Can he survive in a world where his life will be lost anytime?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- nhoxvip114
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 26
- Views
- 6,949
Chapters(11 total)
- Chapter 8: Work and exploring the Cravens ForestMar 23, 2020
- Chapter 7: Twilight Forest and exploration (planning)Mar 23, 2020
- chapter 6: Trent and A-rank groupMar 22, 2020
- Chapter 5.1: A person who has a new mission [i mean battles]Mar 21, 2020
- Chapter 5: Visit the first cityMar 19, 2020
- Chapter 4: Prepare to head out.Mar 8, 2020
- Chapter 3: Let’s build the dungeon (Again) and future works.Feb 27, 2020
- chapter 2: Let’s build dungeon, the first battle.Feb 25, 2020
- chapter 1.1: There are people who try to become professional hero.Feb 23, 2020
- Chapter 1: my first statFeb 22, 2020
- Chapter 0: a new lifeFeb 21, 2020
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Community Reviews(2)
- MillieRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5All you gotta do is improve ur grammer ^ v ^
I like your story ideas! Good job on that T v T 👍
Maybe you can try adding some funny parts to improve and gain people's interest!
Or some action parts, though it may destroy some brain cells...
Or romance, which I can't make -w-
Or.......nope, dunno what to say next. - OskatatRoyal Road★★★ 3.0I'm giving the story and characters the benefit of the doubt, it hasn't been going on long enough to give a good judgement on it.
The writing style is ok. I'm not too great with the short sentences and many breaks, I prefer a bit beefier paragraphs, but that is my personal taste
The grammar is bad. If you need proper English to enjoy a story you may have to skip this entirely. It jumps between tenses, uses the wrong words and the whole list of common errors. I appreciate the writer is not a native English speaker, but that is why editors and proofreaders exist.
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John Mullard works for a game software company. His life is extremely normal until one day, a thief sneaks into the house and kills him. He is taken to another world by a man claiming to be a god and promising to let him be reborn. Ironically, he becomes the master of a dungeon. Will he survive in a world where his life can be lost anytime?