I'm the dungeon master

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I wake up without any memory of who I am.

I look around to find myself in a dark room, where the ground is wet and a scary-looking guy is kneeling behind me while I am naked.

And a voice in my head was telling me to say “open system.”

I’m cold and wet, and this is weird...

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2024

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Rating
3.5/ 5.0
Followers
20
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5,777

Chapters(18 total)

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  • paperfanRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Good first draft. Some little hick-ups and structure issues in the first few chapters, but nothing too confusing. Keep up the good work, definitely worth reading. Could also use a bit of fine tuning, narrative speaking. A bit too many story arcs throw too fast, but the passing is easily fixed by little rework and setting a more front to back story telling.  Main quest, side quest, side characters quest definitions could be a bit push for cohesion.