I'm reincarnated as the last god?!

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Description

Emyrs, a 17 year old boy, was summoned into the unknown world called Eceth. He found himself as the last god of the god race and he has been lying dormant since the mysterious end of the era of gods. He sets himself to enjoy the world he is in and that is through traveling and sightseeing the wonders of the world of Eceth. He mets new companions and annoying "flies" on the way. Read how he as a god, travels around the world with his lovely companion and saving people along the way.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Crystalz

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.2/ 5.0
Followers: 46
Views: 23,018

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

DarkAetherRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I gotta say the series is cool and has potential but is missing out on a few things. When Emrys first wakes up he has access to a magic tower and is a god however there really isnt an explanation for why he has or even needs a tower in the first place. Another issue i have is when emrys leaves his tower for the first time and accidentally destroys an entire village by accident, emrys just kinda goes oops shrugs and states he needs some control training. Finally my last point that i wish to put forth is motivation in a sense. Emrys is both a god and controls a tower that seems to serve the passive function of being a dungeon but he doesnt really have a motivation, he wakes up states he owns a tower and then goes on to become an adventurer (kinda a blah choice there since its been done soooo many times) BUT there is nothing for him to really DO. Emrys has these cool abilities but he doesnt use them because using spells will go into overkill and he's got an indestructible tower that he pretty much ignores and he doesnt even have dutys as a god which could be really cool if done right, on the other hand this could be turned into a dungeon novel by emrys focussing on his tower and creating more powerful monsters. On the last hand emrys could just say I want to see the world because its new then have a plot way to seal his powers and go off to explore while being only slightly more powerful than everyone else with the occasional epicness of all power free.
In any case the series is a fun bit of work with some interesting potential that I hope that we get to see happen.
KhalaenasRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
As said in the title, I like the concept, but I think that the story and chapters should be fleshed out more and made more personal, and it could be a great slice of life OP story, and not a power fantasy as so many other stories are.
Good luck, and stay Frosty!
HxboFlameRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I'm not going to lie to you, I'm going to be serious and upfront with you, whereas sometimes I have the same problems. First, you need to develop your story more, fix your grammar, and add more detail. Because you're just rushing into the story where it honestly dosen't make since, and experienced readers will read this and see that an easy word such as chatted spelt as chated. You know? It's simple things, I like the story to be honest, but, it needs to be improved alot...