I-Laxa:The Beginning (Dropded)

Self-Published

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Description

Soma High-schooler genius who able to create a system that able to transfer you in the gaming world.But it's not perfectly ready if you enter you only back after complete the game, No logout or saving option.Not knowing that his Friend John change the current game CD to an MMO game Called I-laxa,Now he and his Four Friend trap here, But a genius never give up he thinks to make another system from the scratch. But in this world, no internet even no computer exists. So he and his friends try to figure it out and suddenly they know in this game magic exists. but how to use it they don't know. Som saysif no internet or compute excite here then I have to create one. Doing that I need to use magic.Now he and his four friends start their new journey.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021
Author
SenpaiSen

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYVIRTUAL REALITYADVENTUREMAGICROMANCE SUBPLOTSECRET IDENTITYPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIREINCARNATIONSUPER HEROESTECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEEREDATTRACTIVE LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.4/ 5.0
Followers
4
Views
830

Chapters(4 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • ranamldRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I enjoy it, it's not that its really unique but its batter than some random stuff i read, it's really underrated but in future, i guess your story been acknowledge
    I enjoy it, it's not that its really unique but its batter than some random stuff i read, it's really underrated but in future, i guess your story been acknowledge
  • sanjupaswanmld2020Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    NEW TYPE ISHEKAI NOVEL, I LIKE IT FOR NOW LETS SEE WHATS HAPPEN NEXT,,,,,I ALREADY KNOW HE START TO MAKE COMPUTER AND INTERNET  READING PLOT BUT I SUGGEST YOU YOU MAKE THAT FAST NO NEED MORE DETAILS,, WE NEED ADVENTURE AND ITS SEEM LIKE ITS GONNA NE HAREM xD ,,, KEEP IT UP
    CHARACTERS LIKE SOM AND SHATTO BOTH INTELLIGENT. JOHN IDIOT TYPE, MAGIC AND INTERNET REALLY INTERESTING TOPIC, AND ALSO YOU ADDED COMEDY.
    WITH LATEST TECHNOLOGY YOU CAN GO IN VR WORLD, MORE LIKE SAO AND IN OTHER SECTION YOUR BODY TRANSFER TOO,
    NO DIE OPTION, IN-GAME LOGIN OPTION, NOW I WANT TO KNOW NPCS.
    I FIND YOUR STORY UNIQUE .GOOD JOB
    NEW TYPE ISHEKAI NOVEL, I LIKE IT FOR NOW LETS SEE WHATS HAPPEN NEXT,,,,,I ALREADY KNOW HE START TO MAKE COMPUTER AND INTERNET  READING PLOT BUT I SUGGEST YOU YOU MAKE THAT FAST NO NEED MORE DETAILS,, WE NEED ADVENTURE AND ITS SEEM LIKE ITS GONNA NE HAREM xD ,,, KEEP IT UP
    CHARACTERS LIKE SOM AND SHATTO BOTH INTELLIGENT. JOHN IDIOT TYPE, MAGIC AND INTERNET REALLY INTERESTING TOPIC, AND ALSO YOU ADDED COMEDY.
    WITH LATEST TECHNOLOGY YOU CAN GO IN VR WORLD, MORE LIKE SAO AND IN OTHER SECTION YOUR BODY TRANSFER TOO,
    NO DIE OPTION, IN-GAME LOGIN OPTION, NOW I WANT TO KNOW NPCS.
    I FIND YOUR STORY UNIQUE .GOOD JOB
    IT'S LIKE LOG HORIZON AND SWORD ART ONLINE MIXED WITH EXTRA SPICES..
    IT'S LIKE LOG HORIZON AND SWORD ART ONLINE MIXED WITH EXTRA SPICES..
  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The premise is not bad, fairly conventional, but the writing, dialogue and tone could all use some significant copyediting. The issues with the grammar and incomplete dialog tags are among the easiest fixes. This would greatly improve the flow of the piece. The narrative voice itself comes through fine. Not a bad opening. Even though it is dropped, it does show some good framing.