I Have To Be Dead To Be Reincarnated Don't I?!
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Description
Shirai Jouya is a 19 year old college student, who hates everything about the isekai genre.
Unfortunately for him, he gets dragged into one himself, thanks to a substitute goddess who accidentally teleports him to a chaotic fantasy world by accident.
To make things worse the substitute goddess can't use any magic after teleporting him, and they both get stuck in a distant realm, packed with tons of crazy and mysterious events.
Join their adventure as they try to find their way home while at the same time solve the mystery behind their misfortune.
Will they ever find their way home, or is Jouya doomed to become the very thing he hates most?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- Saikyu
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 581
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- MirpletRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Overall: The story is still young but it is definitely interesting, and I am curious as to how the MC ended up in that situation. It will be interesting to see the magic/world develop and what the author plans to do for it.
Style: I can see from your notes and just the story you are trying to go for a light hearted story with comedy and that's fine. Just a couple of things. Be more Confident. Don't worry about if the reader says to rewrite your chapter. Unless you get some good criticism as to why you should. Seriously it's your story as long as you are happy with it, it's fine. With that being said fix the spacing on Chapter 1. It doesn't make sense for it to be spaced out then and then return to non-spacing in the next chapter. Honestly unless you are switching scenes you don't to separates parts as long as the flow between one scene and the other is smooth and noticeable. Don't worry readers aren't that dumb we have read plenty of stuff before.
Story: Like I said still young but has plenty of potential. I saw the notes or maybe the comment to reference for Gintama and if that's where you are heading then that's fine. I love Gintama. Just make sure you take your time with the story, introducing new characters places as you advanced the plot.
Character: Again still early on but from what I have seen the two characters seem well written enough. I like their interactions and will be interesting to see where the story takes them.
Grammar: I didn't see any misspelling so I think it's fine in that regard. The only thing is the use of Male Goddess. That doesn't make any sense since Goddess is the term for female deities. Also use Google to find more words. You can use deity or god. You are also in third person so you can use they, he, it or whatever else. Back to the whole Male Goddess thing, maybe that is what you are going for and you did it on purpose in that case then okay, that's fine. It's your story it was just something that kept throwing me off.