I have 3 Systems: Divine Beast, Divine Sect, Divine Search

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Description

In a world where cultivators can destroy the heavens and mortals are as numerous as grains of sand, Lin Huang is reborn for the third time. Haunted by the memories of his previous deaths, he awakens three mysterious systems that guide him in conflicting directions.

[Host, you have not yet accepted the disciple with the supreme physique.]

[Host, you have not yet tamed the celestial dragon with the primordial bloodline.]

[Host, you have not yet seized the opportunity to attain the dao.]

While others fight for a single chance at greatness, Lin Huang faces the challenge of balancing the countless opportunities that lie before him. But is he truly in control of his destiny, or is he merely a pawn in a much larger game?

But as Lin Huang wields his own power and defies the rules of cultivation, powerful entities begin to sense a shift in the balance of the world. Will he be the savior or the ruin of all?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: ThousandDaos

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 46
Views: 8,659

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Underdog_005Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story itself is very good. As can be understood from the title it's about a OP Mc with 3 systems but the style of execution is very impressive as well as the direction the story is going in. I just would like the same level of quality to be maintained and if possible the speed of chapters to increase as it will not only help readers as we obviously would like more chapters but it will also increase the reception this story recieves and it really deserves a good audience.
matt_kleinRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This story is an interesting blend of litRPG and XianXia / Cultivation genre. It is packed with action and missions. I found it a casual and entertaining read.
Story:
In terms of worldbuilding, the world of Qiankun is large and complex, and it’s evident that the author has put a lot of effort into hammering out the details of the game mechanics. At some parts, the details may become a little overwhelming, but I got used to it quickly.
The plot starts off slow but gradually picks up the pace. Like an RPG, the story is divided into numerous missions, and they have all been entertaining so far. However, there is a lack of general narrative direction as I struggle to find a central conflict or a united purpose among all the missions. I’m sure the author will reveal more details as the story goes on.
Style:
The author uses a simple and straightforward approach to writing, which gets the job done. Throughout the story, there is no redundant, flowery language. Actions and dialogues are fleshed out directly, and every paragraph serves its purpose. Sometimes, however, it may be a little too direct, especially when it comes to explaining the game mechanics. Perhaps a little bit of show-rather-than-tell would be more suitable. It would also be nice to see the author switch up the narrative structure of each chapter for more variety.
Grammar:
There are occasional typos and grammar mistakes, but they do not impede the reading experience.
Characters:
I find the side characters to be interesting, especially the character of Yan Luo. I’m curious to see how he will develop and fulfill his prophecy of becoming the demon. We are also introduced to life stories of unseen characters associated with game items, and I find them to be intriguing. On the other hand, the MC could need a little more work. So far, he seems to be a didactic sensei, but I am very curious about the other facets of his personality and motivations.
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