I Get A System, But I'm Still On Earth.

Self-Published

Description

Ho Lee Fuk, a young man that just finished his college.

As he spending his day looking for a job, a mysterious force gave him along with several others people a LitRPG like power.

The world didn't change, there was no demon king or alien invasion coming to Earth.

This just suddenly happened without no clear reason.

But, while looking at the black letters that were floating right into his face.

Does having a system can help me getting a job? How about a girlfriend? Ah, I forgot to feed my cat.

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XoShadowoXRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I would like to give this a better rating but the language use is borderline terible.
With only that being the negative side to this fic. I can't in good concience give it a worse rating. (It's readable)
My advice for the author :
Spoiler: Spoiler
Read more professional english works if you want to improve or cop out with a proofreader, both work.
You started adding a whole world around a character that isn't fleshed out. Don't do that. People need to hold on to something they like in order to care for a broader world.
I actually liked reading this so selfishly I hope you improve and I recomend this fic. cause it is good.
....I need to sleep.
JknottRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I like the story. But you need a proofreader or editor. Sentence structure needs work