I Get a Second Chance and Accidentally Become a God

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

themurderbunny

• Hey, aren't they just too adorable!?
  Jun 30, 2019
• Hey, At Least It's Not a Foot Fetish
  Jun 20, 2019
• Hey There Eliza
  Jun 3, 2019
• Hey, isn't there something to do
  May 18, 2019
• Hey, Isn't This Kind of Annoying
  May 14, 2019
• Hey, Aren't I Too Overpowered
  May 13, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• BookReader12Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  damn it why is there so few chapters, this is amazing! i love the way you made the relationship between eliza and mason, i also love the other perspectives, one thing though is that the mc doesn't actually show off that much, but thats just my preference, but yeah its an amazing story
• hikari izukiRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  realy, i just got back here after a while not finding anithing fun to read, trying to find something new to read and lucky me! im amazed by how much i like this series with just a few chapter
• theaceoffireRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Very OP main character, balanced by him caring more for the girl of his dreams than his overwhelming power.
  Turns a boring 'point and click' win into a 'Aww, she has a skirt! Squee!' feeling. Focusing more on the people and the setting rather than on his own power creep.
  And he isn't randomly slaughtering people or hurting feelings for no reason like some story does. May change later.
• InslayerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Way, way better than I thought it would be.
  Don't be dissuaded by the title, the story itself is gold!
• Syafiq RosnanRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I'll be honest this would be my first time reviewing a story on royalroad. But I think this is worth it.
  The story is light-hearted and comedic in nature, making it a relaxing read.
  The character(s) as of chapter 6 are highly entertaining.
  While the MC is seen somewhat one dimensional with his lacksidal attitude towards anything other than his pursuit of his objective, it's understandable with how overpowered he could be. (Though this may change)
  The plot itself move on its own pace. Because of the fact that it's mainly comedic in tone, it make use of the pace.
  Even the interaction between the character are enjoyable, although the amount of character seen is still a work in progress.
  The grammar overall is good enough (what you expect a professional book?).
  Overall a story that you would not lose anything by reading it.
• KO_KingRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  It’s really good. I normally don’t like story’s with long titles and non-serious plots . I tend to read things like the wandering inn and Iron teeth or LORG but I’m genuinely enjoying this. Good stuff!!! Keep it up author! You have talent and potential!
• CourtJessterRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  It's early days yet, and I have to admit the title is a little... I don't know. Titles are hard to make I guess xD. But my god this is so adorable to read, and I can't wait for more chapters. I thought it was adorable and funny. And did I mention adorable?
  I think if, as a reader, you are going to take this super seriously as an isekai story about isekai things, you're going to be deeply disappointed. The tone I'm getting is more playful. For casual romance comedy, I think this delivers what it does well.
  PLS MOAR CHAPTERS
• Sanity ClauseRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Amusing premise; we'll see about the character developement..
• Killer_WhaleRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

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• RecklezzRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Taking into account that this serial is a lot like a japenese Web serial I give it 3/5. The reasoning behind this is that the serial is just too straightforward, there is no suspense. Although this serial is quite a simple read and quite enjoyable. But it still feels like a draft, the dialogue is shallow, bordering on tropes. But it does have some planning behind it, it is just executed in a too hasteful manner.
  To the author I would say: take some time and flesh out the story a bit more, the trainine montage in the beginning certainly didn't justify the skills he received. At least not with the amount that of coverage that it got. As a reference "everyone else is a returnee" has a fairly satisfying montage, where the reader feels like he deserves the growth that he gains.
  Next is the mc, show don't tell. It feels weird when the mc has a dialogue with the reader. Like when he uses words like "lol", when talking to himself. At least differentiate between thought and action. It wouldn't disrupt the pacing as much.
  The pacing, this is a bit messed up, its rare that we actually get the mc on ground level, interaction with the world. Usually it's an event that is quickly introduced, handled and move on. This can happen in two-three paragraphs. As a reader I get disoriented with the pacing and you never get that chance to introduce proper world building.
  Characters, be careful that you don't jump too much into clichés and tropes. It's fine to use a tundere as a supportive trait like the succubus,  but it shouldn't be the defining personality.
  World building, describe the world, your story would be better for it. You shouldn't go crazy with it, but readers like to feel the situation and live the characters, be careful that the story doesn't read like a manga.
  I didn't initially mean to be this harsh, but I hope you as the reader and author can get some value from it.
  Feel free to contact me if you're interested in the specifics, you're also free to dismiss the review if yo