I Gave in and Finally Let the Giant Crab Take Me to the Bottom of the Ocean
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Description
A transgender oneshot based on a rather bizarre dream.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- givemeyourbones
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- Rating
- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 292
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This is a bit of an interesting piece because the focus is on a budding relationship amidst a year long stay under the sea. The relationship part is fairly straightforward and as the blurb says focuses on some aspects that are LGBTQ, but it does not take focus. Instead getting comfortable with the changes as mer-people and discussing the undersea city takes up most of the piece. There are a few plot holes, such as how the Crab is allowed to do this, how the city is not known and why it all remains a mystery - but hey magic is the answer. The prose is a bit basic and is not all that engaging, but it keeps the reader's interest with a quick pace. The ending felt a little rushed, but this is a good piece despite that.