I did a good thing now What?

A cliché (I won't hide it) with my own twist on it.Saito Grey was a regular high school student until a stereotypically Royal Road-esque; obviously expected twist(Not my Twist) occurred and sent him spiraling into the Unknown; this is his story.This is my first self written storyLil bit bout me: I'm 17 years old in HS Aspirations are Uni.Why I started the story: Just cause, I was in 2nd period bored; was thinking of the web novel I was reading last night Thought to myself ""Hmm ima try this"" took some paper out and proceeded to write this is that although edited some.Btw I LOVE criticism as it shows me where I was bad at and how to get better so indulge me (Not a Masochist though):)Inspired by Za1d3, Andur and many others I can't remember off the top of my head right now to write this. LOVE YALLS Stories and to Za1d3 WRITE MORE FORGOTTEN CONQUEROR PLZ.