I Chose The Wrong Save File, Now I'm A Necromancer Class!

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Description

Veronica is an avid player of the popular MMORPG, Goblet of Lacritia. She decides to play with her brother's save file as a prank, ending in her teleporting into the game world as his avatar. Can she navigate this world and survive the other players and NPCs?

BTW: Currently the formatting for chapters before 12 is out of wack, I used a different website to write and it was really strange lol. But I'll be fixing those issue as I upload/finish editing the newer parts.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Grimmylkin

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 23
Views: 5,282

Chapters(24 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

StarlightNecromancerRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Maybe its just me, I do have some Specific issues when it comes to the way I have to have things formatted and its done in such a way that even the reader options aren't able to help. Paragraphs are double, sometimes triple, spaced by hand and occasionally only single spaced for reasons I don't quite understand.
The story itself is a promising premise, and as the local Necromancer Enjoyer I was more than happy to see another grace Royal Road, but with the way things are formatted at time of writing I may have to pass. Shame, "Transported into the game and now its real" is a trope that is usually fun and I'm always willing to give a shot.
I feel like there’s sections where some more description could have been used, such as when the MC is realizing that she’s in the body of her older brother’s character. I can see what the intent of that moment is, or at least one angle of it, but its so short and to the point that we miss it. A slow more methodical approach to it would be more impactful I think.
This story has some legs, the sauce is there, and I can tell that the author is cooking because I can smell it from the kitchen. I think it just needs a little more time on the stove.