They gave him a choice. So he choose.Join to the journey of the most cheated Demon lord ever. Actions scenes mostly by Micheal Bay.---------------------------------------------My first fiction. English isn't my language so sorry for poor grammar.

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TORMENTORRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

i like this this is good don't stop this awesome seriously don't stop this OPness overload BOOOOOOM

yoian213Royal Road

★★★★ 4.0

If the author gets a good quick proof reader it would be fine. You can sort of just fill in the words as you read wont really notice the poor grammar so its fully read able. I would recommend reading this but only if you can fix the grammar in your head or you also really bad with grammar. :D

Cre8Royal Road

★★★★ 3.5

Grammar, Format, Style: There's too much onomatopoeia, so little details, sometimes the pace is moving rapid, so a lot of points are confusing~ long story short, the way the Author write is just painful in my eyes!
BUT! The story is interesting. It always makes me laugh! MC's too OP, the other characters (you stupid Gods and Goddesses, I'm talking to all of you! *glares*) makes my stomach hurt so much, it made me cry.. of happiness. It's really lacking a lot with the way its written but it has potential.
Good luck to the Author~ I can see you're really having fun with your story! ^^

KaiserNephilimRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

a demon lord without a harem plot? what's with OP selfish demon lord if there are no girls for him?
great story by the way....

Small-sanRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

The chapters are short and badly formatted, yet I am laughing my ass off. LOL

herbin45Royal Road

★★ 2.0

Too little text and not a lot of detail. The story is a bit better but so far i can't really tell. The grammar is pretty bad and i will post what i think would work better under here. The character right now i can't really tell a lot about but he seems kinda bland right now.
Keep in mind this is My personal opinion and i'm not an expert at reviewing.
And this review is too early to decide anything for the upcoming chapters, but i would love it if you could make it more detailed and try and fix some of the issues.
Chapter as i would have written it:
Darkness, all around me it's pitch black.
'My body feels funny, actually i don't fee...
"close but no."
"Huh?’
"Hi there mortal” He said to me.
"Who..?"
"Basicly god."
"God? As in god from our world"
"No, not from your world.
I stared at him trying to figure out… anything. He nods and starts to explain.
"I am searching for a person to do a certain job in my world.”
"And I am that person?”
"We will see if you are the right person."
"So… I was chosen? Did I die?”
"No and yes”
"Huh?
"Well… to say it simply, Normally god would search and spy on people to find a matching person. But I am not a normal god. I am lazy. Instead of killing one person with a truck I sent a meteor on a random city.”
"EH?!”
"Currently I am inspecting every soul one by one to find a person matching my criteria.”
"You anihilate an entire city to make your job easier?!”
"Yup.”
'Okey. First this guy is crazy. Second he can kill thousand people in a blink. Third I am in some deep sh*t. The solution? Play along.'
"So how I will be checked?”
"First task passed.”
"Already?!"
"Yup. You didn’t start calling me a monster, scolding me or sh*t yourself.”
"But it can mean many things.”
"Yes so here is the second task. What would you do with great power? Answer honestly.”
'If god asks you that question answers are coming by themselfs. Help the poor. Erase evil. Fight crime. Create a harem. Become a hero. But honestly…'
"I would use it for myself”
"….Ding. Passed”
"…

I can cheat? So let's have fun.

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