I Can Absorb Animal Abilities

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Description

What would you do if you could get a second chance at life?This is a fresh new start for Grim. But, he has to start from the bottom in this life.Join the adventure as our main character starts as an ant and crawls his way to the top through various reincarnations and tries to live his life differently this time.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.6/ 5.0
Followers
205
Views
153,841

Chapters(103 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • GattalaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It is a fun read, I really like it, but I think it's a bit rushed, the story got so much potential yet the author keep time skipping without banking on the amazing lore he/she is building.
    The first two reincarnation deffently need more world building as I think they could have added more depth and interest to the story
    Would continue reading and I'm so interested in it's future devolopment.
  • KasharRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Although I do find the concept interesting, the whole story (up to the chapter I've read, at least) is way too rushed.
    The whole time I was reading I felt it could be a very nice novel if it was revised and really went into what's happening instead of trying to get as fast as possible to the next arc. Maybe it's just me, but it feels like the author has a lot of ideas and wants to write them all down, but they end up not going deep enought to make the story or the character interesting enough (at least for me).
    I apologize if my opinion is a bit harsh. I do see potential in this, but from my point of view it will be unrealized until they go deeper into Grim's feelings and his interactions with the beings around him. Altogether it feels like a first draft which, with some polish, could become quite enjoyable.
  • OmniWizardRoyal Road
    1.0
    This hurt mentally to read. I kept going as a palette cleanser for a great book I read so the next big one would be good by comparison. I read excerpts of the worst written sections to friends and it made them actively worried about my mental health.
    The writing feels stilted and clunky. The scenes require multiple reads to try to decode what is happening. The numbers do go up but not enough to make it worth it. It doesn’t get better. The first few paragraphs are all you need to read to understand the situation. This feels like a sandbox for the author, not a story. At one point a major arc is ended out of the blue in a few paragraphs because the author got bored.
    please do yourself a favor and don’t read this.