I am revived again, but this is a strange world
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Description
Jason an exmarine was somehow on a loop . A life loop where he is continuesly being reincarnated. What kind of world is he in right now
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- DionfhelCuyno(Verde)
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 15
- Views
- 2,516
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- DrunkenDutchRoyal Road★★ 1.5I really dislike the writing style of the author thus far. The chapters are short, it's full of cliche's and hardly anthing happens. The MC ends up naked and the side girl runs into him going all KYAA PERVERT (gosh really? overused thrope is overused). Also it's a ping pong story where person a says something followed by person b and then person a again.
The author does not describe how the characters look like, the backgrounds or anything. Also it took just 3 chapters for a timeskip. Why bother telling or explaing how one dumped in an unknown world got onto his feet? How did he survive with no money, no place to live or anybody to depend on? Nah let's not go into detail, he's a pizza boy now!
Storywise either things go too fast because certain things get skipped or it goes too slow because nothing happens. So far it took 1 chapter to introduce him naked to a girl, one chapter because he was at a police station for being naked and one chapter for a short useless info dump + he delivers pizza.