I am a pill container in the mage world

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Description

Struck by lighting, Rachel gets reincarnated in the mage world.But unlike everyone else, she ended up as a pill container!Is she the protagonist or the legendary 'granpa' every protagonist has?

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Ai is used only for checking grammar. Nothing in the plot is written by the AI.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: maybeweneed

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 2.9/ 5.0
Followers: 162
Views: 262,121

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Community Reviews(5)

Setsuna03Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
MC being reincarnated as an inanimate object is really getting popular lately and now we have an mc who reincarnated as a pill container. Yes, a container for pills.
Not a lot of chapters are out yet but if executed right, these story can be really good. So far, all I can say is there some typos which might disrupt other people's focus when reading. Not sure if the grammar, such as tenses, are correct. I am not too good at grammars.
For now, I will give these 5 stars and I might edit my review in the future when there are a lot more chapters that are out. For now, if you enjoy stories of MC being reincarnated as an inanimate object, you can give these story a try.
mustreadbooksRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Reincarnation as an inanimate object for the main character seems to be gaining popularity lately, and this time, it's a pill container. Yes, you heard that right—a container for pills.
There aren't many chapters out yet, but if executed well, these stories have potential. Currently, I've noticed a few typos that could be distracting for some readers, and I'm uncertain about the grammar, especially the tenses.
At this point, I'm giving it 5 stars, with the possibility of revising my review as more chapters are released. If you enjoy stories featuring an MC reincarnated as an inanimate object, this one might be worth checking out.
KoonriRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The title describes issue I have with this story. Given, characters don't have to be goody-two-shoes there are people that are interested in selfish and evil MC. However here she is just too chaotic to make sense. I mean, OK, she decides to distance herself from her bearer and have no problem to fully cooperate with the person who murdered her previos years ing companion, OK. However she is found by the person who is immediately betrayed and killed by his trusted friend and she has no problem to fully cooperate with that betrayer/murderer thinking "it may be fun experience". Now, even if she doesn't care about things like morality - just for perspective of self-preservation that makes no sense for the sane person to trust their life (well, existance) to such guy that proved himself ready to betray and kill his friend (not just comapanion) for minor (as he wasn't even sure they found something worthy at all) gains.
Strictly WorseRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
I greatly respect the ambition of anyone making a book with an inanimate object as the MC because honestly I have no idea where I'd start and this is reasonably successful at doing so. It follows the MC though a variety of owners using the MC as a way to tie their disparate stories together. This lets you see a lot of different aspects of the world but to me feels more like a series of short stories with the same side character than one larger cohesive story. While objectively the MC makes progress, most of the sense of progression comes from their owner and feels reset when the MC passes to their next owner. Personally that's not really what I'm looking for but it absolutely has an audience.
The general power levels of the story escalate rapidly to a point where it is very hard to know what isn't possible for some of the characters, so if you like high powered, soft magic systems this story is worth a look just be prepared that that isn't really where it starts. Similarly if you like cultivation novels this is basically magic by means of cultivation. Some of the writing is a bit rough, particularly the dialogue at times can feel more like a synopsis of what a character wants to convey than a conversation.
Summary: The changing owners and rapidly escalating abilities and stakes weren't for me but I think there will be those who enjoy the story. Honestly I'd have enjoyed a story where the MC stayed with the first owner but that wouldn't appeal to everyone either.
FalconjhRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
The early writing is painful to read. Some problems with the writing itself gets better, it appears due to usage of chatgpt and Grammerly.
That leads into the storytelling problems. Foreshadowing is mostly nonexistent. Events just happen, and they are written as just happening. We get side stories and very large data dumps (all telling, no showing, no "windowpane" writing) which, at most mean anything in terms of the chapter in question and are almost always irrelevant after that point.
Then the story itself just goes further and further into grimdark territory. Morality not only ceases to actually matter but is actively punished; hellscapes of essentially universes that make Warhammer 40k's descriptions of itself being grimdark look cheerful are described as being a common occurrence for all factions. (It follows the Xainxia tropes regarding multiverses rather than the sci-fi tropes).