Hysteria (hiatus?)

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Description

A teenage boy lived his life carefree in-spite of his scary looks, yet always helping his mother who had seen one of the worse parts of humanity. He was feared by others, but didn't really care about it. All he cared about was to kill the man who made her mother's life miserable, but what happens when he achieves that task but at the price of losing his own life. Watch his journey into the next life....P.SEnglish is not my first language, so there might be some grammar issues. Also this is my first ff so i don't know how it'll turn out, and the gender-bender tag is for the MC.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Tsundere_Queen

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREDRAMASUPERNATURALSLICE OF LIFEROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFEGENDER BENDER

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Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
729
Views
121,102

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(9)

  • salamance1Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Well I have read a few reincarnation stories. The story itself is the common MC dies and god gives them another life.  Its still a bit early to tell, but the story is well written, there really hasn't been enough information on the MC other than his love for family so there really hasn't been much character development .
    The only downside so far is some of the sentences are strangely worded. Nothing to the point that discourages you from reading. You notice it, but its easy to understand what the author is trying to say.
    The cover is really nice too, so I guess that's another plus?
    Looking forward to more.
  • BlockturtleRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This fiction is absolutely amazing. Honestly when I started reading it I didn't thisnk it would actually be this good. Although in the end I was hooked when I got to Prolouge 2.
    I really want to see this continue, and I hope you wont give up this story when it has been done so well. There have been people going on about there being plot holes 'here' or 'there' but in reality the majority of what people are going on about make perfect sense if you just use a bit of common sense.
    Other than this I noticed that you will sometimes confuse 'his' and 'her' which confuses me sometime, but other than that I really see no problems with this fiction so-far.
  • Elina VioletsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Although there are allot of aspects that are pretty mainstream while making this type of story, I'm totally hooked on this X3
    Sometimes I do find it a bit annoying it keeps repeating how pretty the hero(ine) is, but this is just the beginning of the story so later on when it's more action it'll probably not say that too many times.
    But still, love the story so I hope you'll continue it ^-^
  • HeavenlyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I have three words to say: Give. Me. More.
  • TritonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This book is great and I need more, lovable characters, great story (so far), and only a few Grammer errors ! Please come our of hiatus soon!
  • brian007Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I really like her personality and with her ‘RAGE fuels her power’ thing *kuuuuu* this is what I’m looking for >_<
  • kisuke28Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    You can relate to the MC before he dies and after he/she comes to the new world.  It is well written and well thought out.  I can’t wait till July when the Hiatus is over.  Cheers to you Tsundere_Queen
  • AllstarallRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The style is mostly first pov of the main character, and then some with other characters and flashbacks. How the flashbacks occur just… It breaks the flow of the story. The characters pov also sometimes appear random at some times. It just breaks the flow.
    The story is just starting with only 6 chapters, but so far it is amazing!! There’s a lot of potential in this!
    Grammar is good. Didn’t see any mistakes.
    The characters are different and have distinct personalities. They are fleshed out quite a bit for it being only 6 chapters. We can predict what the characters will do to an instance. They aren’t forced at all.
    The premise is a bit cliche, but it is still fine. Unexpected, because I was looking in the recent updates section when I looked at this.
  • hayazi96Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    THE GENDER BENDER PARTS OF THIS STORY ARE DONE VERY WELL IN COMPARISSON TO OTHERS I KNOW OF. OOPS, CAPS... well, not gonna re-write it now.
    Anyway, I'm left wanting more, even with the 5 or six minor problems I have. In fact, I won't even say what they are except the TIME based MIX up and PLACEMENT of "HER", when at that time, it should still be "HIM" , or the "His/Her" issue. That's it, I think I said all I needed to in my pm. Begging for more, should be enough right? BEGGING!!!