Humanity's last hope

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A slave owner name Antonio is killed mysteriously. He wakes us with his clothes stripped and replaced by rags and his legs bound in chains . Wondering what is happening he cries out and is answered. He has been reincarnated by ""God"" as a slave in a world where all of humanity has been subjugated. He is charged with freeing all of humanity a balancing the scales of power by any means necessary. Watch his story unfold as he makes decisions that will affect all of humanity.Will he have the strength and character to unit people who have given up hope? Will he find the strength to stand against all of the foes that will come his way? How will he manage to rebuild an entire civilization from a group that has no home and their history has been erased?

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
swordnube21

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICTRAGEDYDRAMASCI-FISUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOTSTRONG LEADMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSLOW FANTASYREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYSOFT SCI-FIPROGRESSIONFIRST CONTACTATTRACTIVE LEAD

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4.1/ 5.0
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1
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334

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • TUSFRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    (As of chapter 4)
    The story idea seems to be an interesting take on a widely used trope. God's plan went screwy and the balance of power is skewed, so introduce bring in someone to make changes to everything (while also doubling as punishment). Seems reasonable.
    It's also an amusing take, seeing someone who grew up in a society where video games (especially RPGs) are non-existent, suddenly be pushed into a world with RPG-like mechanics.
    However, our MC is a slaver from our own world's Ancient Rome. Yet somehow he doesn't understand the concept of crushing a power before it gets too strong, and suddenly becomes teary eyed when he hears about that it. Despite being someone who had people whipped to within an inch of their life, he is somehow squeamish when he sees how the human slaves are treated by his elven master.
    Somehow, within the span of a day or two, Antonio went from ruthless slaver, to a moralist crusader? And the catgirl slave who finds humans filthy? She's willing to help him after he threatened to torture and rape her? I don't buy it. It's hugely inconsistent characterization. Maybe you can justify the catgirl's behavior with his Charm skill, but when it comes to Antonio himself, it's as if his personality was suddenly replaced by someone from modern times.
    I'll continue following the story to see how it goes, but I'm keeping my expectations low.