HP: Ronan's Journey

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Ronan Johanson was very pleased when he transmigrated into the body of a normal orphan living in Little Whinging. With the knowledge that he had acquired about stocks from his previous life, he realized that he would be able to become a billionaire if he played his cards right.

Transmigrated with the gift of photographic memory and minor telekinesis he thought that his life would be awesome. But when a squat little old woman, calling herself Professor Sprout comes knocking at his door, he realizes that his life is not going to be as easy as he thought it to be.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Yash Vardhan

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(7)

ZentriesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
its a good book. some spelling problems but i much prefer a book with that then a bland book that spells everything correctly. the story is interesting and i hope the author comes back and continues righting its in the future. other then that i don.t have much to say so 5 stars
crackheadRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Okay, I am not very good at this so here I go.
this is A nice twist to the story and I have been Enjoying it to the hilt.
longbottom as the new one to live and the mark is on his body not the head and he is more stable.
Ron is a bit of an ass but that was him all the way,
Super witch is still super LOL what can you say it is what it is.
Harry is still there and about half of what he would have been or done.
the new true MC. not all good or all bad to this point I like it, I see all kinds of ways to twist an turn it, family black hmm cool and want to see what dad had in his place new house elf? a vault of who knows what so much to read as of yet hope to see it all so keep going and I will keep dreaming.
Thank you for the story
HeimskrRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
There are a LOT of issues with the writing in the beginning, but it improves as the story goes on.
The MC is a bit sociopathic, but then few aren't on this site.
The plot is fine, standard HP fanfic fare of MC going to hogwarts to get super OP due to not being an idiot adolescent inside.
The unusual twist to this story is also related to the MC.
It feels like the author is trolling HP fan fic readers, who are usually huge HP nerds, because the MC constantly gets all the lore wrong, like hugely badly wrong.
I like that.
BarnmaddoRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I don't remember the books all that well, so I'm not very good at picking out the differences, but many of the scenes seem very similar to the books to me. For example, the fight in the chamber of secrets happens about the same. Personally I would have preferred to see different solutions and plot arcs.
It is rather frustrating that the MC's memory of the HP storyline often forgets major plot points, while remembering other parts of the story in extreme detail. It's possible whoever sent him here curated his memories like this.
Grammar is readable, but there are consistently errors.
The main character's personality is very selfish, and is only slowly revealed through their actions. That personality isn't really explained, but they have a mysterious backstory which might eventually explain things.
One of the things I most liked about Harry Potter was the strong/loyal friendships, but in this story the MC is too selfish for that. Instead we get more of a power fantasy where the MC is an extremely hard working and capable wizard. Unfortunately, after several hundred pages they haven't really done much with that power. The plot advances the same as the books, I wish the main character had recognised that and instead of inserting himself into Harry/Ron/Hermoine/Malfoy's adventurers, he'd befriended some of the secondary characters. Let Harry save the day while befriending Luna Lovegood and Neville Longbottom and going on new adventures with them.
XavroarRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I got to the second sentence in the first chapter when I read the first error. Then every other sentence afterwards had an error. Author, for the love of all that is sane and happy, please edit your story. I am sure that it can be a great story, but as it is now is barely readable. If you read this review, then please edit your story. If not for my sake, then do it for those who will come after me. Instead of stopping at the first chapter as I have, they will be able to read and enjoy the entirety of your story. Wouldn’t that be nice?
theanimemailRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I feel that my edit suggestions comment on chapter one shows exactly why I'm dropping this: the kids at the ORPHANAGE speak in an oddly formal manner, words are consistently missing, the story can't seem to settle on which tense to use and subsequently keeps switching between the past and present (it seems to be going for present tense, but the author has done a bad job of bringing out the potential of this writing style), the grammar is "Bleh" and results in a very stilted manner of storytelling, and finally, the author has not fixed any of the above issues despite people bringing this up through edit suggestions.
Seriously, I feel like my feelings can be summed up by what I stated in chapter one: "This was terrible and needs a rewrite. I hope you continue to improve as time goes on." Overall, I'd not recommend reading this book. Oh, and if you want further clarification on what about this story needs tweaking, go look at my extensive edit suggestions on the aforementioned first chapter.
I'd also like to highlight a quote from yndrelbosch that sheds light on what many will feel when reading this book: "The plot is great, but umm... I'm kinda just rewriting it in my head as I read. Everything from word choice and placement to grammatical and spelling errors. Honestly, I've gotten rather adept at rewriting stories as I read them, the quality around RR never seems to be quite there ~~"
Have a nice day.
Davey daveRoyal Road
★ 0.5
I suspect this is a first story in the early days of learning a second language by someone in their mid teens, so for that I would say this is an excelent first effort and quality does seem to go up. That being said I will also be brutally honest, so no hard feelings hopefully.
Bad grammar, all the chars "voice" are the same, completely inconsistant oc.
It definetly can be improved with work. If you evision it as a op si into a world based on harry potter but not then maybe you could enjoy it with the following improvements:
speach: all the chars speak the same way, with the same vocab and nothing that sets them apart in how they speak. Additionally they all speak like someone being forced to have a conversation with someone they have nothing in common with. Sometimes this leads to funny moments, but it is clearly unintentional.